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vega
03-20-2003, 10:16 PM
To everyone Vega here i thought i'd try a story. Sorry if i'ts not very good, i want to try something new.

This story takes place between Tom and his sister Karen. Tom is not like your normal 14 year old teenager. He is shy, finds it hard to make friends and generally does not belong in any teenage group at his school. His sister Karen is the exact opposite. She is popular and can fit in with any crowed at school.

What doesn't help Tom is the fact that Karen knows how shy and weak her brother is. Karen has always managed to dominate her brother and beat him everytime they fight, and if the opportunity arises to humililate him in front of someone she will. Like the time two years ago when they ended up fighting in the kitchen in front of their mother. Tom was powerless to stop Karen's huge punches and when she through him on his stomach on the kitchen floor she put her sneakered foot on the side of Toms face and put her arms on her hips. Tom found it totaly embarassing to be pined under his sisters foot while his Mum just laughed.


Back to the story at hand. Tom's sister loves listening to her Music and always finds that Tom has taken her Cd's without permisson. She has always been leaniant with him but was lately becoming sick of her brothers attitude about it. One day when she came home from school in a pissed of mood she went up to her room and found her Cd missing. This pissed Karen off even more in particular because she knew where the CD would be.
This was when she decided to take her fustration of the day out on Tom and more impotantly teach him a lesson.

About twenty minutes had gone when Tom got home and went straight up to his room and found Karen sitting on his bed. She got up and headed straight towards him. Tom knew by the look in Karen's eyes that she wasn't in the best of moods and his heart began to race as she approched him. Karen asked him in a smooth and mellow voice, where's my Cd Tom. He mumbled under his breath that he took it to listen to. She told in in a more stern tone to speak up. That's when Tom knew he was in for trouble. He stated back to her that he took the CD to listen to. Karen replied to Tom that he Knows he shouldn't take things without asking. Tom heart beat began to pound as she put her hands on his shoulders. This replied to Tom with a smile which followed with a knee to the groin. Tom felt the pain straight away and dropped to his knees.

Karen walked aound to the back of Tom and pushed him over onto his hands and knees as he tried to let the pain pass. She told Tom that she has to teach him a lesson about taking things without asking. She lifted her school boot up onto her brothers back and pushed flat onto his stomach. She stood their with her foot on her brothers back and aksed him where the Cd was. He told her that it was in his bag by the door. Karen simply stepped up onto Tom's back and over heading towards his bag. She retrieved her Cd and shut Toms door. She walked towards Tom and stepped up and over his back again this time heading towards Tom's stereo to put the Cd on. Tom begged her not to do anything to him but she kicked him in the ribs until he would turn over onto his back. Once Tom turned over she put her foot on his chest and placed her hands on her hips. She looked down at her brothers scared eyes and knew she had him where she wanted him.

He repeated to her sister not to do anything to him but with that plea she removed her foot from his chest and placed it on his forehead instead. She asked him if he could take her weight on his head. he told Karen that he couldn't and beged her not to try.
She laughed and told him i'll let you warm up first. Karen began to step repeatedly over Tom head. He could feel the tread of her sister sole grinding into his skin. Karen just laughed at him and told him this was good because she could do arobics on his face while teaching him a lesson. Karen stopped and asked him have you warmed up yet. Tom begged her but she just put her foot on his mouth so he couldn't reply. She stepped up full weight on his face and bounced. After a few minutes she got down and took her Cd out of Toms stereo. She told him what would happen if he takes another Cd again. For one last laugh she Positioned Tom so he was facing the door on his stomach. She walked in front of him and told him to stay still. She spepped up on the back of his head, walked down his back over his but and off his legs, She the room with Tom and his tears. THE END.

Like i said this was my first try at a story sorry if it's crap.

bchickens
03-20-2003, 11:36 PM
The only complaint I have about your story is that it ending so soon :) Keep on writing! I look forward to reading your next story! I only wish that I was able to write like some of you guys out there!

adamant19uk
03-21-2003, 1:47 AM
Bravo Vega! Have you got any more?

cobbler
03-21-2003, 9:03 AM
Definitely off to a great start. I could see a series coming out of this.