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SoleMann
03-02-2003, 5:46 PM
Overtime: Part 2
By: SoleMann

As the pressure increased my concentration was broken and I looked down at her feet. Her right foot, which had just been by my face moments ago, had now worked its way back down the front of me. Luckily the heel of her foot had landed on my leg, but the ball of her foot was now pushing down on the tip of my manhood.

She set the marker down on the top of the bookshelf and said "OK, I just have to check if I got everything correct before I'm done." she gave the board a once over checking it against the paper she had in her hand. "This just wont do, it's been too long since someone washed down this side of the board and you can hardly read it. I'll have to actually wash the board down and redo this side. This is going to take a little more time, you holding out ok down there?"

Realizing that she was talking to me directly I looked back up at her and my eyes met hers. Despite the pressure on my manhood, when I looked up and saw her smiling face all I could do was utter a strained "Yep."

"Great, could you hand me the Windex and paper towels off the bottom shelf?" Jamie asked.

I didn't say a word; I just grabbed them off the shelf and handed them to her. My hands where shaking like a leaf from both the excitement of the moment and the pain in my manhood. She took them and started cleaning off the board.

While she carelessly did her work, I suffered beneath her. I could feel her trying to keep her balance by the way the pressure would increase and decrease on my manhood. As she would lean forward the pressure would increase crushing my tip. I could also feel the base of my manhood straining to support the extra weight she would put on it. I was in heaven and hell at the same time.

This went on for at least 10 minutes and as I watched her feet, I could see them tense up every time she leaned forward. Those perfect little feet I longed for where now doing a number on my manhood. At least she's wearing those cute strapy sandals and not something with a rough thick sole, I thought to myself. Wait a minute, I can't believe with as thin as those soles are that she can't feel what she standing on and what she's doing to me? Couldn't she tell that it suddenly got easier for her to balance?

With those thoughts in mind, I heard a smack as she put pen down on the shelf top. I looked up to see she was already looking down at me.

"All done" she said "now just to put the cleaning supplies away."

At last, although part of me didn't want it to end, I wasn't sure how much longer I could have endured it. She grabbed the supplies with her right hand and I waited for her to hand them to me. Then with a devilish grin on her face, she grabbed the top of the shelf with her left hand and suddenly squatted down on me. She looked me right in the eyes as she leaned down to put them away. The pressure on my manhood became almost unbearable. My tip was being crushed much harder then before and it felt like my base would be torn from my body. There's no way she could have missed the expression on my face caused by what she was doing.

Once she was done, she stood right back up, looked down at me and said "Thanx for ALL your help." she seemed to accent the "ALL" by pressing down with her foot on my manhood. Was it just coincidence or had she known what was going on?

As she finally stepped off me I stammered out a "No problem, any time."

"Really?" she said, "cool, looks like a got a new stepping stool."

To be continued...

Part 3:
http://www.mistressdestiny.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=8628

xtremek
03-02-2003, 6:41 PM
That was a Great ending, excellent story, def. got the attention of my manhood

Pls continue

welcome to the boards =)

btw alot of people read, but few reply, dont let it bother you, im sure hundreds enjoy yoru story even if only 5 reply

speedbump
03-02-2003, 6:57 PM
Well written story. Jaime is very much my type. Petite, with small feminine feet... flat strappy sandals. WoW!
Thanks for posting. I looking forward to more.

MistressValerie
03-02-2003, 8:47 PM
Thanks, SoleMann -- I think I identify a bit with the heroine, since I am also quite petite and mischievous, with size 6 feet ... and sometimes I "don't notice" the effect I am having on a guy ... ;)

Love and squishing,

JacosK
03-02-2003, 9:32 PM
That was a great story, or was it a real story?????

JacosK

gunslinger
03-03-2003, 5:06 AM
Great story. I look forward to reading more of them.

barracuda426
03-03-2003, 6:59 AM
Um, WOW.. this has to be every office workers dream. When I worked at Walmart I use to have the ladies in lay-a-way use me for a ladder when accessing the upper parts of the storage bins. Though I never had THIS happen, it was still pretty fun.

'Cuda

vertago
03-03-2003, 3:41 PM
I also have a habbit of reading and not replying, which I'm trying to correct. with that said, I think it was well written, and hope to see the storyline continue. well done!!!

Ste Letto
03-04-2003, 7:37 AM
I don't know if I count as a "seasoned" author, but I have posted a few stories, and aim to post more.

Whatever, you don't need tips from me or anyone else on this board about how to write stories. That was tidily set up, enough detail to draw folk in, not so much it gets boring; effectively evoked, with playful characterisation, and nicely ended, with a bit of a tease.

Laryywildman
03-04-2003, 8:25 PM
Very well written. Very nice. It drew you in.

Also, Ste Letto. I have enjoyed your stories as well. Yours are some of the best on the board.

SoleMann
03-05-2003, 5:53 PM
Thank you to all that have read my story, especially those who took the time to post a reply. I didn’t think my little story would go over as well as it has here. The great response I have gotten has inspired me to continue the series. As a matter of fact, it got me so fired up, that I came up with enough material for at least 4 to 5 more parts. Unfortunately, the ideas where coming faster then I could type (ok, hunt n peck) them down. Thus the delay in getting part 3 done. Once again, I put a link to part 3 from part 2.

barracuda426,
I just read your reply, and I think the next couple of parts will be right up your alley.