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The Demon
02-01-2008, 3:35 AM
Blake’s nose was still pressed tight up against Hannah’s ring, as, after the third ring, a female voice sounded on the other end of the phone.

“Hello,” a husky female voice on the other end, “can I help you?”

“Urm, hi. I, urm, can you do, urm, like, couples?” Hannah stammered her way through her first sentence.

“Of course, it is one of my specialities.” The female voice purred on the other end of the phone, like a cat being stroked.

“It’s Michelle isn’t it? See, the thing is Michelle, this is, urm, not your average situation. I, urm, well, I need someone discreet.” Hannah was starting to worry about the sense of involving someone else in her plans.

“Why don’t you just spit it out about what’s bothering you, don’t worry, I don’t judge.”

Hannah took a deep breath, “Okay. Basically, my guy’s been cheating on me, and, well, I’m teaching him a lesson. And I had this idea of bringing someone in, and…I don’t know, I just want to humiliate him like he has me. I’m sorry I shouldn’t have bothered you.”

“Give me an address and I’ll be there in 20.” The voice on the other end didn’t alter, and Hannah’s surprise was so great that she almost forgot where she lived.

She quickly explained the address, and breathed a sigh of relief a she pressed the call end button on the handset, letting her body sag and relax. It was only when Blake’s muffled protestations from under her ass got loud enough, did she realise that she had in fact rested all her weight on him and cut his air supply off. Hurriedly releasing the pressure from his face, allowing him to breathe again, Hannah very nearly apologised to him, but caught herself just in time.

Thinking for a minute, with him breathing heavily, trying to re-fill his lungs, below her, she decided that she could use this to her advantage. Slowly lowering herself, she reformed the seal around his nose, pushing down hard, feeling his nose try and move up inside her slightly. It felt good, and hearing him try and scream underneath her goaded her on. She rotated her hips, and rocked gently back and forth, before, after a full minute depriving him of air, she sat up slightly, pushing her asshole back up against his nose.

It had the desired effect, and Blake snorted harshly, trying to suck air in through his nose to fill his burning lungs. The sensation tickled Hannah’s puckered little hole, and sent delicious shudders up her spine. All the while, underneath her, Blake was breathing in the undesirable smells of her nether regions. As she rubbed her anus against the tip of his nose, Hannah started to experience another pleasure, one that she had never expected would excite her. She had always been against anal sex, and anal stimulation, but in these circumstances, the dirtiness she had always associated with it just seemed right.

Wondering just how far she could make him go, she decided that at this moment in time, she could try anything, and there were various means of persuasion at her disposal. As she lifted her creamy white behind from off his face, she swung her leg round so that she was sat on his chest, facing him.

“Had enough Blake – blink twice if you have?”

He breathed in and snorted out, trying to blow the smell of her arse from his nostrils. He didn’t appear to be blinking at all, so she reached behind and closed her hand firmly round his testicles, pulling firmly towards his feet, prompting a cease in action and a whimper from Blake.

“Again, have you had enough, two blinks please?”

Blake looked into her cold eyes, and then blinked, very deliberately, twice. Tears rolled down his cheeks, and his face was red from the exertion of straining for breath, and the gagging caused by the panties in his mouth.

“Okay. I am going to take the tape off now, but you must do exactly as I say. If you do not, I will hurt you,” she squeezed his testicles again to enforce the point, “and the tape will go back on, with something else I will find to fill your cheating mouth. If this is understood, and you agree to my terms, then blink twice.”

Again, two very deliberate blinks from Blake.

“Ok, now before I take the tape off, I must warn you that if you try to protest, or you make any noise, I will immediately place it back on. Is that fully understood? Think about it for a second, and then two blinks.”

Two more, laboured blinks from Blake, and Hannah reached forward and ripped the tape from his mouth.

“Don’t spit those out yet!” Hannah ordered, “I want to see you chew them, and then suck and swallow all that is in your mouth.”

Blake made as if to protest, and then whimpered slightly and started to move his jaw in a chewing motion.

“That’s good, now suck. Nice and loud. Very good. And swallow now please.”

Blake sucked loudly, and then, with a devastated look in his eyes, slowly prepared to swallow. He retched loudly and started to cough as he swallowed the foul tasting mixture down; his involuntary reaction causing him to spit the sodden knickers onto his chin.

“I didn’t tell you you could spit them out did I? Oh well, at least your mouth is clear now.”

Hannah picked the knickers up from his chin and examined them; the creamy substance around the gusset had all disappeared – presumably swallowed by Blake a moment ago, and the brown stain on the back had faded to one of very light tan colour.

“You’ve done a reasonable job on these babe, well done. While I was sat on your face, I thought of something else I would like to try, and it seems that you’re more compliant to try it now. Remember, if you don’t do exactly as I say…” Hannah didn’t finish the sentence, but let it trail off menacingly.

Moving her body slowly up from being sat on his chest, Hannah positioned herself with her knees either side of Blake’s head, and her womanly parts directly above his mouth. After her earlier climax on his nose, she was still damp and sticky, and little beads of moisture signalling her fresh arousal were forming on her labia. The revulsion on Blake’s face was evident, he had never indulged in this area of oral stimulation, and the though of it sickened him; it was only his growing fear of how far Hannah would go that prevented him from crying out in anguish. His eyes widened as she lowered herself slowly down, until their two sets of lips met. Hannah just stayed there, waiting, with her lips seeming to moisten more with each second. She stared into his eyes, and he stared back at her.

“You know what to do,” she said softly, “and you know what will happen if you don’t…”

Gingerly, Blake stuck his tongue out, and slowly licked up the slit of her pussy, screwing up his face in disgust as the taste of woman hit his tongue. Hannah encouraged him with a rocking of her hips, rubbing herself against his tongue and mouth at the same time, tilting her hips so that her swollen clitoris was positioned directly above his mouth. Blake stuck his tongue out and licked again, and as Hannah moved against him, he started to increase the speed of his tongue action.

“Oh, oh, oooh, oooooh!” Hannah started to moan as the beginnings of an orgasm wracked her frame. Her vagina released more juice which dribbled down onto Blake’s lips, making him stop his ministrations and move his tongue away.

“Oh, you bastard, you’ll pay for that!!” Hannah gripped his balls and yanked them harshly towards her, prompting a yelp from the restrained Blake.

“Hannah, I’m sorry, I…”

“Not a word!!” She cut across him sharply, “If you do that again, I’ll pull them until they touch you belly button!! Now in a minute I want you to thrust you tongue in and out of me, and regardless of what happens, you do not stop!!”

Hannah swung her leg over Blake’s head, spinning herself round so that she was again positioned over his face, facing his feet. Her vagina was centimetres above his face, and she lowered herself down again until her vaginal opening was lined up with his tongue.

“Now, tongue out and in, start slow and when I tell you speed up.”

A shudder ran up her spine as she felt Blake’s tongue slide slowly up inside her, reaching into the secret depths of her body. As she rolled her hips, she groaned deliciously as the pleasure reached every nerve ending, making it tingle.

“Faster.”

His tongue pumped in and out of her quicker and quicker, and her breath caught with a flush of ecstasy; it felt so good, it was something he never ever did, and knowing how much he was suffering was just making her more turned on. Thinking about it made her feel naughty, and dominant and in control, it was a feeling she liked, and, the more she thought about it, the stronger her orgasm was becoming.

“Deeper!!” She ordered huskily, as suddenly her hand shot down to rub on her clitoris, drawing quickly to a huge climax.

“Oh my god, I’m gonna come!!” Hannah moaned, causing Blake to try and move his head and stopping his stimulation of her insides.

“Don’t you dare,” snarling at him, “you’re going to keep that tongue going until I say stop, and anything that runs into your mouth you are going to swallow, got it?!”

To emphasize the point, she twisted his bullock, prompting a forceful return of Blake’s tongue to her vagina. As she frenziedly rubbed her clitoris, she bucked her hips backwards to angle his tongue in as deep as it would go, and felt his nose push against her anus. It was enough stimulation to push her over the edge, and a powerful orgasm gripped her body as she felt his nose nudge up against her dirty asshole, his tongue thrusting deep into her cunt and her clitoris burn with sensation. She felt her vaginal muscles tighten as she released her womanly fluid, imagining the horror Blake was experiencing as it dribbled down his tongue into his mouth.

“Swallow it!” She commanded huskily, grinding down onto his face to emphasize the point. Blake noisily swallowed the viscous liquid as it dribbled down over his tongue and into and around his mouth, feeling total revulsion and humiliation at what she had made him do, and having to swallow such a disgusting product of female arousal. He half gagged, and trapped under her, with his nose pushed half into her rectum, his tongue still pumping up into her vagina, he started to weep.

“You can stop that now, but not for too long, I have another use for your tongue don’t worry. And quit being a baby Blake, it won’t help you at all!!”

The Demon
02-01-2008, 3:41 AM
Man, it's really starting to flow now - I seem to have written twice as much as I had by this point in the story last time. I'm actually really starting to get into it now, everything is slowly falling into place, and I know exactly where I'm headed.

Also had 2 more ideas for new stories, kind of abstract, but I think that they should work pretty well with the right words woven around them.

It is taking me a fairly long time to write each part, but having said that, I don't want to leave posts up here that only seem half finished, so I'm trying to find a good place in the story to break it up.

Part V (coming very soon I all being well) will see Blake performing annalingus on Hannah, and the arrival of the escort Michelle - hold on to your seats for that, because things will start to get really explosive when she walks through the door...

As always guys (and ladies), please comment, debate, criticise, encourage, suggest and leave creative ideas...I love to hear anything people have to say, and it is something that spurs you on to write more...

Until Part V then...

Demon

Eskobar
02-01-2008, 4:03 AM
awesome work man keep it up :2guns:

mangee1976
02-01-2008, 5:43 AM
If you feel the flow keep it coming... Thanx for sharing!

Sauur
02-01-2008, 2:25 PM
VERY good story!

“Don’t you dare,” snarling at him, “you’re going to keep that tongue going until I say stop, and anything that runs into your mouth you are going to swallow, got it?!”

I LOVE it! Keep it up please!

Hmm if the escort could be... how shall we say... freshly used? That would be utterly disgusting....

AND HOT!

Heckron
02-01-2008, 11:13 PM
Fantastic story buddy! Keep up the good work! You're an extremely talented writer!

sealbert
02-01-2008, 11:51 PM
Great story, this is the kind of stuff I am dreaming about.
Wish it could happen to me one day.

Thanks for all the time and trouble you have gone through to put it on line here.

Robert

hellbentforleatherr
02-02-2008, 5:20 AM
Demon, very good. Its good to read a story with smells. I was pleased to read when she put the tape over his mouth the second time. I was afraid that she had broken him and wasn't going to need the tape. Ass sniffing is so much more interesting when the bottom can't breath through the mouth..

hellbentforleatherr

E.Rotique
02-02-2008, 4:48 PM
Ripper story mate!

Aramis
02-03-2008, 6:39 PM
Forgive my minority report, but how does this well-written story fit under the thread of foot fetish and trample stories? It belongs in another forum my friends!

Aramis
02-03-2008, 6:56 PM
FORGIVE MY REPLY; I thought I was in the foot and trample stories section. Iclicked the wrong link; I am guilty; I admit it; I am stupid; I am sorry. I wish I could delete my previous ignorant reply.

Bently
02-04-2008, 5:39 AM
REALLY really good mate!! loving all of it, great way with words.