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srikar123
02-18-2003, 10:09 AM
hello this is my first post..........it's a story which tells how a man like me beame a complete slave to his woman for the rest of his life
enjoy the story.................

the car's horn was heard and i immediately ran to the kitchen and got a glass full of coke and ran to the sofa in the hall and kneeled at sofa .when she entered the room and sat on the sofa i immediately offered her saying
"good afternoon mistress......would u like to have coke as ur divine body might be tired of shopping"
she didn't respond but just took the glass from the plate and started having it...i sat at her feet and started to remove the shoes from her feet as that was i supposed to do whenever she comes back to home from office or shopping or whatever it is........my awkward position(which she considers as my natural position)......
my life is dominated by tis woman (my wife) in overwhelming proportions...before this i was dominated by my a girl who was my roommate in my college days..it all started like this

5 years ago........... when i entered the college and got registered in the college and went to hostel to check out which room i got....i was surprised t see a girls name as my roommate.......digesting it i went to my room and knocked the door...immediately a beautiful girl came and opened the door and ...
i said "hi!!! my name is kalyan and i was alloted this room.......nice to meet you"
she looked at me and just said "hi!! my name is monica"
i entered in and i was surprised to see that whole room was occupied by her.....as it was very first day i did not protest hoping that she will give me place to keep my luggage
i slept that day and very next day morning i woke up ..i noticed that she already woke up and she was doing her exercises....i watched her for some time and slowly went to her and said to her"hi monica!! frm tomorrow the classes are going to start i think it's better if we arrange our room"
she angrily looked at me and said "everything is in it's place .....your luggage u can keep in any corner"
i said "but"
"shut up and getlost"was her staunch reply......
i couldn't speak anymore and got inside my room...
that whole day i was afraid to speak to her.......
evening i sat in front of tv and started to watch an interesting footbaal match ...........she ws sleeping that time.....after some time she woke up and sat beside me and casually took the remote in her hands and changed the channel....
i said"what did u do monica?? i'm watching the match"
she replied"how dare you to talk so arrogantly to me"
i said"well i'm not arrogant but i'm just asking you to be in control"
then she said"oh..so you want to tell me how to behave??stupid"
i said"please don't call me stupid ....i don't like that"
" oh so what should i call you.stupid"
i got irritated and went away.........days passed like this .she tried to dominate me in all matters and i tried to protest
one day she came from college and i was working in a corner (which i was allotted by her upon my repeated requests)
she said that she was tired and told me to get her the massage oil and asked me to massage her legs......
i was shocked
"what?????"
i asked
"can't u understand if i tell once"she said angrily
i said"look monica i don't like the way u dominate me always......you took the whole room and gave me a small corner.you watch the tv according to r wish and never allow me to do so....you sleep in ur bed and i always sleep on the floor........"
then she said "oh i see .....you worm i think i need to teach u a lesson as u started behaving rude with mw"
"i'm not rude " i said
u rascal i'll have to teach u a lesson ........
she jumped on me and pinned me to the floor.......i was trying to get out of her hold but she with her muscular body started hittting me. and saying to me"you bastard......u deserve a lesson...i was crying in pain...in the start i tried to fight back but i could not stand before her power......i gave up fighting and ws pleading her not to beat me up.
i was crying....like a small boy
please monica show mercy on me from now onwards i'll do whatever uo want me to do please please please..........


contd in next part........

cyberwop
02-18-2003, 8:45 PM
Good 1st effort. I can't imagine trying to write in a foriegn language. English gives me enough trouble and it's my 1st language.

This story has promise. Please continue.

Syphonboy
02-20-2003, 11:57 PM
Nice ending... it leaves a sense of incompleteness in the reader's mind. I like it.