Welcome to the new world.

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Ok all this is my first attempt style i'm going to try and do this in a way will be enjoyable to all i hope.Going to try and explaina few things first if a character in story is talking i will do this
(Bob) hey all my names bob. K if yer all still with me lets begin main character of storys name will be Mike

Welcome to the new world

(Female Guard) Slave! what are you doing!?(Mike) I'm here to report to the commander Ma'am.(Female Guard) Very well go on in slave shes waiting at her desk.(Mike) Thank you ma'am :Mike kneels and kisses her shoe then enters the building:
(Commander Rachel) Slave kneel now! how dare you disrespect me by standing in my presence, Lower yer head now slave and kiss my foot:Mike kneels and kisses her barefoot while repeatedly apologizing:
(Rachel) Slave state yer ID number then give me your report(Mike) Slave number 1564987654 We managed to push the enemy back into the town. They put up a good fight but we managed to push their forces back.

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(Rachel) Good i think you deserve a reward for this you get to be my footrest while i finish this paperwork. Tomorrow we will move out in force and crush the enemy!
(Mike) Thank you Ma'am:mike lays down under her desk and falls asleep being her footrest(Rachel) Wake up!: stomps on mikes stomach: its time to move out slave lets show theese scum what happens when you oppose the Empress!
(Mike) We have arrived mistress(Rachel) Time to address the slaves :Rachel talking infront of the army of kneeling male slaves while her and the other female leaders stand on a platform supported by slaves: I want you all to make the empress and your mistresses proud of you any failure will b e dealt with and punishment giving! :the male forces surge through the city taking prisoners left and right with ease the battle ends in less then an hour:Rachel tells one of the female captains Hmm lets send theese male prisoners to the Center back in the states. Gather the slaves please captain emily.

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:Emily presses a button on the watch shes wearing and all the male slaves stop what they are doing walkover to her and kneel: (Emily) they are gathered commander(Rachel) Thank you emily.:Rachel adresses the slaves again: you all did well your mistresses and the empress would be proud!: out of nowhere during her speech a male prisoner attcks her mike immediately tackles this rogue prisoner(Mike)Oh no, mistress are you allright? :emily yells at mike how could this happen you let her get hurt! she then presses a few buttons on her watch and mike is rolling on ground paralyzed in pain:
:days later back in the states we find mike ina cold dark room the door opens its Emily: (Mike) Mistress is Rachel ok? please forgive me i tried.(Emily) shes fine slave. Now go get dressed up nice your owner wants you brought before her for your punishment :mike is escorted to the palace and brought before his owner the Empress (Empress)Slave! i sent you to protect rachel my daughter and you failed me!

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(Mike) Empress i am so so sorry please forgiv:before mike can finish the empress kicks him so hard in the face he ends up on his back she then jumps ontop of his stomach in spiked heels: (Empress) No talking while i think of your punishment:she walks all over him for an hour thinking: (Empress) Slave you will be chained to the ground at the base where the female soldiers and leaders train you will be trampled for hours a day with no mercy.
:at the academy: Mike is trampled by beautiful women all day some stomping and jumping on him and making him lick the mud off their boots (Jennifer) yer pathetic slave! can't you take any pain?! try this :jennifer stomps on his face instantly breaking his nose: (Jennifer) How did that feel worm? have some more :she then jumps on his ribs til hears one crack: (Jennifer) I'm already bored with you! you got off easy this time. ;that night mike is escorted back to the palace and brought before the empress: (Empress) Hmm looks like those girls had some fun.

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(Empress) Now slave its my turn crawl to meand worship me :mike crawls to her and starts kissing and licking her barefoot.(Empress)Thats enough slave now i order you to clean the shoes of all the females in the palace with yer tongue. :9 hours later in the throne room of the empress: (Mike) I have done as you ordered Empress, i have cleaned all their shoes with my tongue. (Empress) Hmm i'm still not sure yer punishment was severe enough: The Empress calls one of her female guards over: (Empress) Lock him in a cell for a few days again.
:in the cell mike starst to think aout the time and how the world became like this:

k all what ya think if liked ill continue it and what think of style typed it in?

[airoha]

Excellent!!!
Keep going please!
You can insert some descriptions...like empress on her throne with plenty of slaves around her...etc.

Good work man!
thanks