KoKopeLLi68
02-05-2003, 2:20 PM
Fairly new here... first story post so I hope its good.
Part 1- (Just geting started, not too much action, basically just the story line.)
Me and my girlfriend of almost 2 years now keep no secrets. I know everything about her, and she knows everything about me, except for 1 thing. My fetish for being dominated by girls. Being trampled, facesat, anything, I love it all. But, there was also one thing that she kept from me, a deep and dark secret which she revealed to me in the worst of ways...
Since December of 2000, I've been on a tight schedule which I would like to call "The WHIPPED Schedule". Everyday I come home from long and hard hours at school, and I still don't get a moment of peace or quiet. You see, I'm one of the very lucky people who get to live a block away from their girlfriend. Danielle always is needing to do something. "Take a walk with me", "No, don't get off the phone yet!", "But I don't want to do that" and so on. I love her so much, she's also EXTREMELY attractive, but she's so controlling. She's 5'2 105 lbs, yet I, at 6' 208 lbs, jump at her every command. I can't fully explain it, but I think it has something to do with my fetish for being dominated. Somehow, when she tells me to do something, I always imagine that she is my mistress, commanding obedience from her slave, so i do as she says. But 1 day, everything changed.
It started off normal, long hours at school, come home, go back out for a walk with Danielle. Then, back at her house we listened to the radio. By some unforseen and God given chance of luck, they were talking to a rapper about his foot fetish. At first was uncomfortable, but then I just went with the flow, thinking "She doesn't know anything, just relax".
"Wow, it' kinda weird that some people like feet. I mean it's not weird, it's just kinda stupid." She said. Of course, me and my big, defensive mouth said, "No, it's not stupid. It's just like that phrase to each his own. I mean what's so stupid about it?" It was at that point that I realized what i had said. I turned beet red and the worst feeling of embarrssment came over me. "You like feet don't you? Actually, I know that you do. I can see it i your eyes, so tell me something. Do you like my feet?" She put her shoes on my lap. "Well... I... I...". "Lick my shoes clean. Then maybe you can get what you want." A cruel smile swept over her face, it was such an evil grin. I was terrified, so I did what she told me. I took the sole to my lips and licked. It was disgusting. I tasted dirt, grime, tar, and the cigarrettes that she crushed frequently. I was dying to see the look on her face, but i was scared to look up at her. I wondered what would come next. My mind raced. My heart raced. I felt like I was on extasy. I knew that I couldn't keep my mind trailing from her foot, but it did. "Slave, you aren't thinking about me are you? Well, I think you need punishment. Let's go upstairs. I have to show you something..."
Any feedback would be good, positive or negative. I would like to know whether or not to continue this story... so please respond ASAP.
Part 1- (Just geting started, not too much action, basically just the story line.)
Me and my girlfriend of almost 2 years now keep no secrets. I know everything about her, and she knows everything about me, except for 1 thing. My fetish for being dominated by girls. Being trampled, facesat, anything, I love it all. But, there was also one thing that she kept from me, a deep and dark secret which she revealed to me in the worst of ways...
Since December of 2000, I've been on a tight schedule which I would like to call "The WHIPPED Schedule". Everyday I come home from long and hard hours at school, and I still don't get a moment of peace or quiet. You see, I'm one of the very lucky people who get to live a block away from their girlfriend. Danielle always is needing to do something. "Take a walk with me", "No, don't get off the phone yet!", "But I don't want to do that" and so on. I love her so much, she's also EXTREMELY attractive, but she's so controlling. She's 5'2 105 lbs, yet I, at 6' 208 lbs, jump at her every command. I can't fully explain it, but I think it has something to do with my fetish for being dominated. Somehow, when she tells me to do something, I always imagine that she is my mistress, commanding obedience from her slave, so i do as she says. But 1 day, everything changed.
It started off normal, long hours at school, come home, go back out for a walk with Danielle. Then, back at her house we listened to the radio. By some unforseen and God given chance of luck, they were talking to a rapper about his foot fetish. At first was uncomfortable, but then I just went with the flow, thinking "She doesn't know anything, just relax".
"Wow, it' kinda weird that some people like feet. I mean it's not weird, it's just kinda stupid." She said. Of course, me and my big, defensive mouth said, "No, it's not stupid. It's just like that phrase to each his own. I mean what's so stupid about it?" It was at that point that I realized what i had said. I turned beet red and the worst feeling of embarrssment came over me. "You like feet don't you? Actually, I know that you do. I can see it i your eyes, so tell me something. Do you like my feet?" She put her shoes on my lap. "Well... I... I...". "Lick my shoes clean. Then maybe you can get what you want." A cruel smile swept over her face, it was such an evil grin. I was terrified, so I did what she told me. I took the sole to my lips and licked. It was disgusting. I tasted dirt, grime, tar, and the cigarrettes that she crushed frequently. I was dying to see the look on her face, but i was scared to look up at her. I wondered what would come next. My mind raced. My heart raced. I felt like I was on extasy. I knew that I couldn't keep my mind trailing from her foot, but it did. "Slave, you aren't thinking about me are you? Well, I think you need punishment. Let's go upstairs. I have to show you something..."
Any feedback would be good, positive or negative. I would like to know whether or not to continue this story... so please respond ASAP.