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Erebus
09-27-2005, 5:31 AM
In Other World, the normal rules of logic do not apply. Improbable events which, in our everyday existence, we might attribute to madness, wishful thinking or the workings of an over-active imagination, are commonplace there. Other World is part of a parallel universe in which all things are possible, particularly those which seem impossible here.

When we close our eyes and dream, we touch the frontiers of that far-off realm. And yet, though immeasurably distant, it remains within reach. For it is as much within us as it is without…


‘WIN A WEEK INSIDE MY PANTS!’

A thousand neon bulbs winked on and off, illuminating the huge, crowded theatre. On stage, a naked man prepared to claim his prize. Legions of his fellow citizens looked on, in jealous anticipation of what was to follow.

A large, bewigged compere paced the stage, barking through a microphone, reminding all the losers that this could have been them; might one day be them; but not tonight. Tonight it was some other lucky bastard.

Below that glaring, omniscient legend: ‘Win a Week Inside My Pants!’, the image of a perfect woman smiled back; taunting them with her puckered mouth and swollen breasts; with her big, flared hips, and plump, glistening vagina.

Briefly, the camera angle altered, and the all-seeing lens slid down between her legs. A thousand men groaned as the woman’s fingers gripped her buttocks, peeling apart her plump, creamy globes. They leered shamelessly; their collective gaze locked on the dark runnel of the woman’s crack, the hairy trench in which sat paradise – the pouting crater of her knotted anus, bulging with vulgar promise.

Now the woman’s voice echoed around the hall: ‘Win a week inside my pants!’ she cried, then licked her lips and sighed.

The man on stage prepared himself. A week in heaven; a week in hell. Both beckoned crudely, now, in the shape of the woman whose image filled a thousand glittering screens. His head uplifted, he spread his arms, welcoming the crackle of light that tore into his body, shattering his atoms, reforming him into a new image; shrinking him to the size of a small rubbery pencil.

To huge applause, a woman strode onto the stage; the woman on the screen, larger and more vibrant in the flesh. She pressed one hand between her legs, her fingers moving through the channel of her sex. As the cameras homed in, a spiders’ web of sticky love strands filled each silver screen.

The prize winner was carried forward, cradled in the hands of a helper, chosen from among hundreds to assist on this most special of days. The man lay perfectly still. The shrinking ray had not only refashioned his form, it had suspended his more usual functions. For one week he would require neither food nor drink; nor need to expel such items from his body. His arms and legs were useless, too. Only his head, his sense of smell, his eyes, ears, nose and mouth remained active.

A pair of white cotton panties was produced, slipped around the woman’s ankles and drawn up to her thighs. The helper stretched out her hands, and carefully lowered the tiny man, face up into the gusset. She noticed that his expression was no longer calm. His tiny lips were trembling, his nostrils flared a little as he filled his lungs with air.

The helper cupped him from beneath, as the woman reached down, took hold of her cotton knickers and hoisted them up. When he was only inches from her crack, the man began to wriggle nervously. The helper had been told to expect this. ‘All men panic,’ the woman had informed her. ‘Right at the end, when they see my bum-hole, they often become frightened.’

So the helper knew what to expect and held on a little more tightly, manoeuvring him into place, pushing his head up against the hairy knot of the woman’s anus, forcing his face into the crater, his tiny legs lodged in her crack.

The woman pulled her pants up all the way, securing him inside her arse. A soft chair was brought forward into which she lowered herself.

‘He is trapped!’ she told the cheering crowd. ‘See how his little legs wriggle!’

The camera homed in, relaying to the eager throng an image of the man’s body, threshing frantically between the woman’s buttocks.

She would wait until he had calmed down a little; and until sufficient images had been relayed to taunt the other men with the knowledge that this might have been them. Might one day be them. But not tonight.

Then she would get up and leave the forum. She would dress fully and go about her normal business for the next seven days: a tiny man imprisoned in the gusset of her pants.

She felt him wriggle furiously, his little head lodged inside her anus, and sighed. It would soon be time to turn him round and offer him another view of paradise.

It would be a long week for both of them. She was very happy.

She hoped he was, too…

Bently
09-29-2005, 11:05 AM
well i liked it!! would love to read some more, thank you.

14352
09-29-2005, 2:33 PM
Your stories are wonderful. I hope there's more to come.

Erebus
09-30-2005, 9:36 AM
Thank you both!

I <3 Facesitting
08-21-2006, 7:03 AM
i know it's a little late but..

HELL YEAH !!:clap:

Erebus
08-21-2006, 7:24 AM
Agreed Erebus, it makes your shrinking stories about sealing little men into women's underwear look positively normal, haha.

Do you know, I couldn't even remember which story that was. I thought it was a reference to 'Best Face Forward', which also involved an unfortunate young man finding himself imprisoned inside a pair of knickers. I seem to recall I was going to continue with that story, but never got round to it.

I'm not the force I used to be. I can't compete with youngsters like Susan S and Master Rodzo - they have so much stamina, it leaves an old man like me quite weary.

Erebus; THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY

You're very welcome. Glad you enjoyed it. Like so much of my stuff, it was written quickly during one of my lucid moments. Once the tablets wear off, they lock me away again.

Will I ever finish 'Pirate Women', I wonder? It's not through want of interest, I would like to assure my handful of fans. I know you will accept nothing but the best, and will, quite rightly, march me to the nearest plank should I fail to come up with the goods.

Uh-oh - that last tablet is starting to wear off...

:pbbbbblt:

Assaholic
08-21-2006, 9:06 AM
Well, Erebus, you've never let us down before. Your contributions are always worth the wait.

grez
08-21-2006, 3:10 PM
yep, I agree with everyone else - I love it, please entertain us some more! great work

suffocated1
08-21-2006, 10:25 PM
What's a young girl doing in the story?

I <3 Facesitting
08-21-2006, 11:08 PM
What's a young girl doing in the story?
This story was written and put on the forum BEFORE the minimum age rule was introduced.

this story came back to the first page of the stories because I replied to it, so i don't think Erebus can be blamed for not following that rule.

suffocated1
08-22-2006, 1:56 AM
This story was written and put on the forum BEFORE the minimum age rule was introduced.

this story came back to the first page of the stories because I replied to it, so I don't think Erebus can be blamed for not following that rule.


I'm not blaming Erebus, I'm merely pointing out that it's not right and proper to include children in sexual stories. (it would be impossible for the mods to edit or delete all previous threads which broke this rule.

You've got a lot of talent Erebus, but us writers have a duty of care to our readers. Maybe you could edit if you can see the validity of my point.

Erebus
08-22-2006, 4:35 AM
Hi Suffocated,

I certainly take your point. To be honest, it had never occurred to me that anyone would interpret 'young girl' as a child - though it obviously should have. This was very clumsy writing on my part, and I see why a reader might think it was a child. However, I can say, in all honesty, this character is certainly not meant to be a child.

When I wrote that line I was, admittedly, thinking of someone in their teens, but basically 18. (In the UK, 16-17 would still be legal, and, doubtless, that was at the back of my mind as well.)

If a mod wants to edit this to remove all doubt, the best I can think of, without too much rewriting, is to alter the first reference to 'young girl' to 'a helper', and subsequent references to 'the helper'. This isn't perfect, but I think it makes sense and will be understood.

Other than that, thanks for pointing it out. I would never deliberately write anything of this nature involving a child, even if it were permissible, so I'm grateful to you.

E:thumbsup:

Assaholic
08-22-2006, 7:01 AM
Well I'm glad we got that straightened out before the Inquisition started.

Rodzo
08-22-2006, 10:45 AM
Yeah, suffocated . .

I don't notice your good self putting out much

for other peoples pleasure

Sooooo much easier to be a critic

than an artist!

It's constipated tossers like you that

make this world the way it is . .

Get a life!

andyc2
08-22-2006, 12:25 PM
I believe that we are criticising the use of "young girl" - age unspecified.
I am old - anyone under 30 easily qualifies for that description.
Let's get a life

suffocated1
08-22-2006, 11:12 PM
Yeah, suffocated . .

I don't notice your good self putting out much

for other peoples pleasure

Sooooo much easier to be a critic

than an artist!

It's constipated tossers like you that

make this world the way it is . .

Get a life!

What the fuck are you talking about?
You've completly missed the point, and when I'm down in Hillbilly country I'd like to visit you and give you a drink.

I've only got one thing to say to you, sonny

C
U
Next
Tuesday

Strict Susan
08-23-2006, 12:27 AM
Now, now, children. Play nicely.

Assaholic
08-23-2006, 6:20 AM
What the fuck are you talking about?
You've completly missed the point

With all due respect, what was your point? This is a whole lot of trouble to be causing over the phrase "young girl" of a story that was posted way, way before the new rules. I often refer to my college students as young guys or young girls. But if you're trying to make a moral judgment about how people under 18 ought never be in stories even before the rules, firstly as Erebus has said, that was not his intention. I think as readers we have to give him the benefit of the doubt since (a) there is no defined age of the young girl and (b) there is nothing that would indicate in the use of the story she is underage. And no matter what she doesn't engage in anything sexual anyway. Besides, anyone that knows Erebus knows he's venerable, and so "young girl" would be reasonable to assume he was referring to Strict Susan even. I'm just not sure why you are making a federal case out of this. You talk of writers having a responsibility to their audience, but readers also have a responsibility to be hermeneutically charitable. This is totally unreasonable and stirring up needless trouble.

Strict Susan
08-23-2006, 6:39 AM
... and so "young girl" would be reasonable to assume he was referring to Strict Susan ...

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You little darling. :D I could just.... I don't know. Sit on you forever? :)

Assaholic
08-23-2006, 7:19 AM
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You little darling. :D I could just.... I don't know. Sit on you forever? :)


Oh you trifle with my lust so. I have to lie down now. I am overstimluated from sexual fantasy overload.

Assaholic
08-23-2006, 8:11 AM
Nope, still overloaded. Aieeee yi yi.

:bananavic :bananavic :bananavic

al-uk
08-26-2006, 2:22 PM
Sorry , I'm late reading this story.. pity about all the 'young girl' worries.. in my book its anyone under 40!

Anyway I thought I'd complain that Erebus has not illustrated the story. He has no excuse.. they are lots of pics of little men being sat on all over the objernet.. sorry internet.. If he couldnt find one he should have made one with paintshop or something..

Anyway in view of this glaring deficiency I thought I'd post three drawings by Namio which illustrate this sort of event..!
I'm sure the young girl doing the inserting in the first pic is over 18....

Erebus
08-27-2006, 1:17 AM
I'm sure the young girl doing the inserting in the first pic is over 18....

Years, or stones? (I don't know what that is in kilograms - half a furlong, I expect.)

I think we should incorporate a weight requirement in our stories from now on. Full facial coverage needs to be maintained at all times, which can't be done if the girl is under 8 stone 9. (Or seven feet in metric. Something like that. One of our younger members - Rodzo, possibly - can put me right if I've gone astray.)

"What do we want? Big, bare buttocks! When do we want them? Nowmmmmmmph!" That will be our cry.

Thanks, Al

PS Any word back from N and L yet? No? :sigh:

al-uk
08-27-2006, 8:01 AM
PS Any word back from N and L yet? No? :sigh:

I think they are looking out for you at junction 37....

Erebus
08-27-2006, 9:04 AM
I'm sending this from my Strawberry (or whatever it's called). Lots of traffic, but, as yet, no sign of your Porsche. (Are you still 'Al Uk1' or something more anonymous these days?)

I've started on the sandwiches - two rounds of tuna - and a Bakewell tart. I used an entire loaf as I thought we'd need an energy boost on the way home, so there are plenty slices left, though we could always stop off at a Little Chef if you prefer.

I'm listening to the Top 20 on my young friend's iPod. A curious experience. You may have to flash me - in the nicest possible sense - in case I'm so engrossed I fail to see you approach at speed.

We mustn't let the ladies down. They'll be as keen as mustard to teach us a lesson and, at my time of life, such opportunities are not to be missed.

It looks like rain. I trust you won't be much longer...

Let's go for it! :bananadan

al-uk
08-28-2006, 8:57 AM
Not too bothered about missing the Tuna sandwiches... but I didn't realise you were bringing a Bakewell Tart along... I dont suppose she is called Lisa by any chance?.... I had an excellent facesitting session under her last time I was in the Peak District... she would have fitted in well with N&L....:think:

Erebus
08-28-2006, 10:57 AM
You rascal, Al!

:dance:
PS I got home at 3.30am this morning. Soaked through. And not a word from the girls. No one loves me any more...:crying2:
PPS Don't be away too long, Al. In the meantime :bananawav And possibly a little light music. Take it away, Rich! :theband:

dawog
08-29-2006, 4:20 AM
Hi Erebus

Sorry for the very late reply, I didnt see your story back then but it is great. Will there be more installments???

I look forward to the next installment

catch ya

Erebus
08-29-2006, 7:19 AM
Thanks, dawog.

Sorry to disappoint you, but, no, there won't be any more instalments of this one. I wrote it as a one-off about a year ago. As you'll have seen, it was recently brought back to the top and, to be honest, when it was first referred to in an earlier post, I couldn't even remember it!

Hopefully, I'll get round to writing something else in the not-too-distant future - I'm supposed to be scribbling Part 2 of 'Pirate Women', but don't seem to be getting anywhere very fast.

But thanks again,

E

Rodzo
09-07-2006, 10:18 AM
er . . . um . . . Yeah

I mean . . like . . YEAH !

seeeeeee? . .

I mean . . .

dribble . .

dribble . .

Dri . . .
......... bb
............ bb
.............. bb
............... bb
.................le . . . .

Heh. . match that, Rich . . .
.

DU007
09-21-2006, 4:37 AM
To be honest, it had never occurred to me that anyone would interpret 'young girl' as a child - though it obviously should have. This was very clumsy writing on my part.... However, I can say, in all honesty, this character is certainly not meant to be a child.

When I wrote that line I was, admittedly, thinking of someone in their teens, but basically 18.

If a mod wants to edit this to remove all doubt, the best I can think of is to alter the first reference to 'young girl' to 'a helper'...

Mod Comment



I've been away, folks....having a whale of a time in Europe & the US...just got back....and have only just caught up with this...


Suffocated1 was right to draw the 'young girl' phrase to our attention....better to be safe than sorry in today's world....


Erebus' original intention seems clear to me - and I appreciate his explanation to us of his thinking...


Again...just to err on the side of caution, I've taken the liberty of exercising Erebus' suggestion, and edited the text....the 'young girl' is now officially the 'helper'...



Oh....and be nice, please, people....!!

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