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The Penguin
12-12-2002, 9:36 PM
Well I hope I get a better response for part 4

The rest of the afternoon went by slowly as all of the girls waited impatiently for 5 pm to come. It was a mad dash for the elevators as the highheeled women burst out of the offices and cubicals not even stopping to put on their walking shoes. running to the elevators in their heels all 11 of them eager to get out of the building. All of the girls squezzed into the elevator a sea of pantyhose,skirts and heels. "looks like you just made it " Carol said to Wendy watching her breathing hard. "Yeah that bastard boss pulled "the old type this out before you go it won't take a minute" routine" "I just hate that It makes you want to smack him one" replied Carol "better yet I imagine kicking the boss in the mouth " said Wendy "since I have been taking kick boxing it has given me a whole new perspective" she commented as the elevator dropped to the ground. The express elevator shot down to the street level and they all piled out rushing for the doors " one guy got pushed aside and he cursed at them "bitches who do you think you are?" "we would have trampled you if you didn't move " Wendy said over her shoulder as she shot through the entrance and out on to the street in the late sunshine. Like a mob the women quickly walked down the street crushing everything in the way with their shoes; cigeratte packs leaves juice boxes pop cans whatever it didn't matter some of the women even seemed to go out of their way to step on anything they saw. In the next block the women from the bank caught up with the first bunch. Heather saw Wendy and fell in step with her walking quicky they chatted back and forth their heels clicking in time with each other. Soon it was like an army of women marching in high heels down the street everyone got out of their way very quickly. They threw open the doors at Roosters and the door men waved them through, every one was excited as it was Friday night and they heard there was no cover for them it ment they could have an extra drink or two Wendy and Heather found their reserved tables and sat down picking the best spot. The girls looked around for the waiters when the Manager came over to speak to Wendy.

Jana hugged Wendy "Its been awhile since collage but you havn't changed at all" "not too much I 've kept in shape with exercise classes, I'm doing the kickboxing class right now"said Wendy " Thats a coincidence I have been doing it for a few years now and have been in a few matches as well. We will have to catch up later; here are your seats "Jana indicated to the tables Joe set up "and Joe will be your waiter for the night, if you have any trouble with him let me know and I'll fix him"
"Great" Wendy said as she looked over Joe "get us drinks now boy on the double" Joe rushed around taking orders; they were a rowdy bunch laughing at him pinching his butt playing with his hair but Joe said nothing because it wasn't worth the trouble and the tips would be good too and he might as well enjoy himself. Joe came back with the drinks for some of the women he scanned the crowd looking at the legs and shoes dreaming about how nice it would be to have a girlfriend again it had been awhile he breathed deeply as he passed the drinks out enjoying the smell of numerous perfums and scents around the women. Joe remembered how his last girlfriend had trampled him occasionally when he begged her it was so good. She always wore heels and he had always helped her pick out her shoes for work and pleasure; he wasn't allowed to" play" with her work shoes but he had her old shoes and the shoes that she brought from the good will store for him to "use". Joe just couldn't help it he had to use her "work" shoes cause they alwaysw smelled so great and they were well worn too. "WERE'S MY DRINK " startled Joe back to reality Joe looked around to see who yelled at him, an attractive blond haired woman glared at Joe "WELL BOY?" Joe replied"comming right up miss" as he looked down at her shoes "god they were nice 4 " high black with those new wide heels that were narrow from the side what I wouldn't give to have her stomp on my nuts with those shoes he thought. As Joe walked away some one called out "Heather" he saw the blond turn and reply ah so thats her name, nice name too He had always liked that name. A few minutes later Joe returned and passed out the rest of the drinks and rushed around taking more orders for drinks and food, collecting empties and emptying ashtrays. He husseled his butt managing always to get glimpses of short skirts legs and heels. The women were getting rowder and rowder as they drank, before long Joe had trouble getting some of them to pay for their drinks. He was slipping through the crowd of women taking every oppertunity to brush up aginst them and drink in their scents as he waited on the tables when some one grabbed thedrinks off his tray. "hey put that back I'll be right with you to take your order" Joe blurted out as he turned his head to see who had taken the drinks. "Fuck you " the three women yelled at him in unsion. Joe had had enough and he knew that that was the one thing he could get some one kicked out for not paying for drinks even Jana would have to agree on this. "I'm going to get the Bouncers right now " Joe yelled back as he threaded through the women to get to the door.
:confused: :rolleyes: :p

Heckron
12-12-2002, 9:55 PM
action my friend...the suspense is killing me!!! :D :D :D
wonderful buildup

Heckron

door_step
12-13-2002, 5:23 AM
You’re torturing us Penguin.:whip:
The way you’re building up the tension is hardly bearable. :D
If the action is as such. It’ll become a great great story :bananavic :bananajum

Can’t wait for the rest.

doorstep

FootCleaner
12-13-2002, 7:51 AM
You asked for replies, so here goes: Nothing happened. This part was about women getting in an elevator, walking down a street, and a guy taking drink orders. No one got stepped on, kissed a foot, or did anything dealing with trample or domination. This happened with the "Second-Hand Store" story. That guy wrote 7 parts where nothing at all happened and then he stopped writing it. Build up is nice, but an entire part about women walking down a street gets boring. You asked for feedback.....
Of course now, some one will reply with something like "shut up. It's his story and if he wants to write about absolutely nothing to do with trampling and put it on a trample stories board, he has that right." In advance, I'll reply "whatever."

gerryl
12-13-2002, 9:22 AM
Nice bit of scene setting but you are sending us mad in anticipation of the next part. All those tipsy high heel wearing girls about to do something to Joe. Don't take too long with posting part 5 as I am sure it will be good.

smashed
12-13-2002, 6:53 PM
Nice build up. I'm looking forward to the next part, and don't listen to the people who want to whine about your style. I learned first hand that writing these things takes time and effort, and it was because of the lack of appreciation for my effort that I stopped writing the "trapped" series. In a nut shell I do appreciate your efforts, and I hope you are enjoying your writing.

The Penguin
12-13-2002, 11:26 PM
Thanks for the input guys I need it to see how i'm doing
pt 5 is realy good (well i think it is ) i m going to post it now hope yiou enjoy ;)
btw having knoweledge of the story line as the author pt 4 maks sense to me hope it starts falling into place for you too