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headpop
04-17-2005, 5:46 PM
Love is insatiable, venomous, and devouring. So when the man of Betty's dreams makes her dreams come true, her love affair demands of her her protection. A protection unlike anything her man has ever seen. A lovely psychosis that begins with the subtle and ends in madness, and death.

Betty was in love. She just didn't know what love was.

LookingUp
04-17-2005, 6:56 PM
Right.

butch
04-17-2005, 6:59 PM
nice line...kinda reminds me of Sin City

E.Rotique
04-18-2005, 3:55 AM
And then? :trump


Sorry, just couldn't resist :D

headpop
04-18-2005, 1:06 PM
Well, I'll post bits and pieces. :)

But she really loves this guy. I mean, everything about him. But she's been taught or knows very little about love (and oh boy is that going to be tough to write about). So like most relationships, she plays games with him. Small at first, but slowly escalating into a long drawn out ending. She's got that guy in a bed that she doesn't want him out of. A possession. And the heartache just never ends. I mean, no matter how much you love somebody, you can't own them. But she does.. and she kills him.

hubbe5522
04-18-2005, 1:51 PM
A facesitting psycho... Great! Never thought about that.

There has been discussions about facesitting mothers & daughters, facesitting robots, human toilets, facesitting cousins, facesitting gays, 300lbs+ facesitting and I've seen clips of women crushing snails when facesitting...

Strange I've never thought of a mentally insane woman doing facesitting before. I don't know what to think about that...

...but please continue!

headpop
04-18-2005, 3:49 PM
Well, it's questionable at best whether love is itself a mental illness. Lust, possession, ownership, and excessive fetish, now that might be mental illness. But Love? I don't know about that.

Imagine if you found your soulmate. So much so that all your hobbies, all your interests, all your career endeavors fly out the window. And everything in your life becomes this one individual. Is she sick? Yes. Is she mentally ill? Or does she kill him out of fear?

headpop
04-18-2005, 3:59 PM
And we're all mentally ill about someone. At least that's what I think. When you "normal" people get married and go out on dates and have these "relationships" your indulging yourselves in a fascination that can't be misdiagnosed. Mentally ill.

:)

Rich
04-18-2005, 11:33 PM
Don't get so deep that ya forget to grab a little bit of what's all around ya. :p

http://www.ebookmall.com/ebook/91149-ebook.htm

hubbe5522
04-19-2005, 7:13 AM
Originally posted by headpop
And we're all mentally ill about someone. At least that's what I think. When you "normal" people get married and go out on dates and have these "relationships" your indulging yourselves in a fascination that can't be misdiagnosed. Mentally ill.

:)
Ok, sure. But I was referring to the "madness" and "to death" part of her love. If we agree that love is a mental illness we should also agree there are different levels of this illness and I think hers is in some ways more extreme than what I, and many others in our present culture were brought up to consider normal. ..then again, so is facesitting :)

Sorry if I made her sound like a cheap psycho in my previous post. There was absolutely no irony about it, even though it may look that way..? I was being sincere and enthusiastic. I think this topic is interesting. You're a great writer and I hope you to will continue the story.

headpop
04-19-2005, 1:16 PM
Oh. Ok. :) I can be a dummy sometimes. Sorry. I thought you were being a bit sarcarstic.

enthusiastically, I think you may be looking at it from a man's perspective in that the madness is immediately thought masculine (it's a circle jerk reaction to sexual violence). But this woman is more detached from acts of violence than he is. Less conscious about it. And even confuses it with her femininity. Yet the energy that drives her is equally as powerful as a man's. She goes further though than a man would, without feeling she was commiting a violent act.

She is, however, a very beautiful woman. Her body is in many ways incapable of violence. And it has nothing to do with how strong(dangerous) she is.

Thanks hubbe :)