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headpop
04-02-2005, 12:35 AM
The first thing you see when you open your eyes is her waving hair, as she tosses her head from side to side in ecstacy. Like a spinning umbrella, it will sooth the sweat on your brow with it's cool breeze. And the eyes widen, to share in the excitement along with her. Such a beautiful woman. But then perspective sets in. And the first thing you wonder is why she's so high above you. Why you see the bottom of her chin. Her neck. Her nostrils. And you scan the senses. The suffocation. Not only of the breath, because you haven't gotten there yet. But of the view. The tunnel vission, and the two giant fades on either side of your face. Like you were tucked away in a hot sleeping bag, the salty sweat stinging the eyes.

And her movements heighten, and she flexes, and all of a sudden you think she's fat! This beautiful face high above you. Because this giant belly obstructs your view. The giant navel dead center seeminly touching your nose. Heaving.. grasping at something you've yet to know. And you gasp for air that instead breaths in her notice. And you suddenly realize you can't breath. At the same time she realizes you. And she looks down, the navel disappears, and a smile glows from her face while her hands wrap themselves around your head. You try again, desperate. And like she were the atmosphere, she squeals. Her mouth opened in sexy pose.

That's when you discover the whirlwind..

Marie B.
04-02-2005, 4:12 AM
That is some sweet prose.

Thanks, HP.


Marie

headpop
04-02-2005, 6:52 AM
Thank you Marie. :)