Luke
11-17-2002, 10:33 PM
My first story, been meaning to post one for a long time, wrote this in one sitting just then. It takes a while to get into it, but i reckon ive put in some good trample content worth the read. Plan on writing a follow up, but only if i see that there is genuine interest in one, so people, leave me some comments!
well enjoy
l8er
Country Grrrl.
Denna was looking out the kitchen window when she heard the tractor come to a halt. Then she heard the rough steps of her father as he approached the door, then the creaky hinges as it swung open and he entered, bringing with him the bright sunlight. It was always the same routine. Now he would sit at the table, eat his lunch that she had prepared, maybe mutter a thing or two, then head straight back out the way he came. routine. boring routine. She was destined for more than this surely?
Denna was gorgeous, 18 years old, 5 foot 7 inches barefoot, radiant blonde hair and deep blue eyes, with nicely sun-kissed skin, smooth without flaw. She was wearing a white singlet today wih short denim shorts cut off higher than her father would have liked. She wore only a couple of rings on her fingers, and a toe-ring on her right foot, and on her feet she wore navy blue flip flops.
'Do you like your lunch daddy?' she asked.
Her father grunted a sound that could be taken as a yes and kept eating. When his meal was almost devoured and the silence between them could not get much more palpable he looked up and started to speak.
'I got a new labor hand coming to stay here for a couple of weeks, you know how busy it gets round this time of the year. He's a city boy, passing through he reckons, needs some money. So i want you to go make up a bed for him in the spare room, nothin to flashy, he dont need much.'
With that her father stood up and went back out to work, not saying another thing.
The next morning, Denna got to meet this new hand. Her father had to go into town early, told her the hand would be showing up about 6ish, to give him a good breakfast and give him the list of stuff that he had written out for him to do. He was about 6 foot, well built, with a scruffy beard you could tell was quite new to his face. He introduced himself as Richard. Denna served him up a good meal and then sat opposite him with her own smaller breakfast.
'So, Richard, why'd you wanna work out here?
'Not a case of wanting to, just needed the money. I.....overbudgeted when I started this little cross country pilgrimage. And unless I wanted to be stuck out here in shitsville I had to come up with some money fast.'
Looking over at Denna, Richard quickly added 'Sorry, I didnt mean to say you live in shitsville, just I....'
'Its alright, it IS a shit hole, I know that better than anybody!' Denna cut him off.
'Why dont you get out if you hate it here then?'
'How am I supposed to do that? I got no money, my father watches me like a hawk, scared his little princess might wanna actually experience some of the world....id love to be doing what your doing.'
For the rest of the meal they talked, more talking than Denna had done to anybody for the last week, and quickly struck up a good friendship.
Over the next ten or so days Richard and Denna became quite close, stealing any moment together that they could. Denna expected to leave with Richard, and was very excited. Her father would kill her, or more likely Richard, if he knew what they were planning. On the second night from when they were supposed to leave, she gave herself to Richard. He was her first, and she was glad for it, he was so gentle and caring. Then she snuck back to her room and slept, with dreams of bustling cities and of course, shops.
The next night, she went to the barn to rendezvous with Richard. He had been payed that day and was supposed to be leaving in the morning.
Richard was waiting there with a stonelike expression on his face, and Denna immediately sensed trouble.
'Denna, you cant come with me' He said flatly.
'What! Why?' she blurted
'Cause I dont need to be weighed down by some silly little girl on this trip, you'd just be a pain in the ass.'
Denna couldnt believe what she was hearing. She dropped the knapsack full of clothes that she was carrying to the ground and covered her face in her hands. 'But you said you loved me and that you would take me away from here.' she said in a broken voice.
'Oh grow up will you! Jesus. The only reason I was humouring you was so I could get your hot little ass into bed. And you really took it to the wire didnt you honey? I thought that after all my efforts and patient listening I still wasnt gonna get to fuck you.'
Denna looked into his smug face and couldnt understand how she had been so wrong, so terriblly wrong about this man.
Richard spoke calmly 'Now, if you'll excuse me I really must be off, catch ya later babe.'
well enjoy
l8er
Country Grrrl.
Denna was looking out the kitchen window when she heard the tractor come to a halt. Then she heard the rough steps of her father as he approached the door, then the creaky hinges as it swung open and he entered, bringing with him the bright sunlight. It was always the same routine. Now he would sit at the table, eat his lunch that she had prepared, maybe mutter a thing or two, then head straight back out the way he came. routine. boring routine. She was destined for more than this surely?
Denna was gorgeous, 18 years old, 5 foot 7 inches barefoot, radiant blonde hair and deep blue eyes, with nicely sun-kissed skin, smooth without flaw. She was wearing a white singlet today wih short denim shorts cut off higher than her father would have liked. She wore only a couple of rings on her fingers, and a toe-ring on her right foot, and on her feet she wore navy blue flip flops.
'Do you like your lunch daddy?' she asked.
Her father grunted a sound that could be taken as a yes and kept eating. When his meal was almost devoured and the silence between them could not get much more palpable he looked up and started to speak.
'I got a new labor hand coming to stay here for a couple of weeks, you know how busy it gets round this time of the year. He's a city boy, passing through he reckons, needs some money. So i want you to go make up a bed for him in the spare room, nothin to flashy, he dont need much.'
With that her father stood up and went back out to work, not saying another thing.
The next morning, Denna got to meet this new hand. Her father had to go into town early, told her the hand would be showing up about 6ish, to give him a good breakfast and give him the list of stuff that he had written out for him to do. He was about 6 foot, well built, with a scruffy beard you could tell was quite new to his face. He introduced himself as Richard. Denna served him up a good meal and then sat opposite him with her own smaller breakfast.
'So, Richard, why'd you wanna work out here?
'Not a case of wanting to, just needed the money. I.....overbudgeted when I started this little cross country pilgrimage. And unless I wanted to be stuck out here in shitsville I had to come up with some money fast.'
Looking over at Denna, Richard quickly added 'Sorry, I didnt mean to say you live in shitsville, just I....'
'Its alright, it IS a shit hole, I know that better than anybody!' Denna cut him off.
'Why dont you get out if you hate it here then?'
'How am I supposed to do that? I got no money, my father watches me like a hawk, scared his little princess might wanna actually experience some of the world....id love to be doing what your doing.'
For the rest of the meal they talked, more talking than Denna had done to anybody for the last week, and quickly struck up a good friendship.
Over the next ten or so days Richard and Denna became quite close, stealing any moment together that they could. Denna expected to leave with Richard, and was very excited. Her father would kill her, or more likely Richard, if he knew what they were planning. On the second night from when they were supposed to leave, she gave herself to Richard. He was her first, and she was glad for it, he was so gentle and caring. Then she snuck back to her room and slept, with dreams of bustling cities and of course, shops.
The next night, she went to the barn to rendezvous with Richard. He had been payed that day and was supposed to be leaving in the morning.
Richard was waiting there with a stonelike expression on his face, and Denna immediately sensed trouble.
'Denna, you cant come with me' He said flatly.
'What! Why?' she blurted
'Cause I dont need to be weighed down by some silly little girl on this trip, you'd just be a pain in the ass.'
Denna couldnt believe what she was hearing. She dropped the knapsack full of clothes that she was carrying to the ground and covered her face in her hands. 'But you said you loved me and that you would take me away from here.' she said in a broken voice.
'Oh grow up will you! Jesus. The only reason I was humouring you was so I could get your hot little ass into bed. And you really took it to the wire didnt you honey? I thought that after all my efforts and patient listening I still wasnt gonna get to fuck you.'
Denna looked into his smug face and couldnt understand how she had been so wrong, so terriblly wrong about this man.
Richard spoke calmly 'Now, if you'll excuse me I really must be off, catch ya later babe.'