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crushed1
11-16-2002, 7:01 AM
The following is an edited version Of Dr. Mutta's story, posted yesterday. I have left the content in tact and only edited for spelling, english usage and general style/readability.

Dr. Mutta, please let me know if the work is to your liking and I will continue to edit future chapter's as you post them.

The Story:

Secondhand Slave.
This is the Story of two Teenage girls that completely took over me and my life.

Cpt.6
I finished my coffee at once, the girls had already stood up from the table.
"C´mon now" Madde and Jessica were on their way toward the door.
I took my jacket and hurried after them.
They seemed to be in a real hurry, I thought to my self.
Both Madde and Jessica swayed their hips for me, so my eyes were glued to
their asses in those tight jeans.
These chicks really got me horny, I felt my cock grow inside my trousers as I watched them.
When we got to the shop I was so excited that I could hardly open the door, my hands were shaking.
At last I managed to open it, and we went inside, "Follow me" I said to them and showed them the small room behind my desk.
"Come in here, if someone looks through the window they will see us" Madde and Jessica came in and
Jessica drew the curtains to the door.
I lit a candle and put it on the table. In the refrigerator I found a bottle of California red wine.
The girls examined the room. It was not so much to see, at the table there was a very comfortable sofa and an old leather armchair.
I went out into the store for wineglasses, and found three crystal glasses that I brought back with me.
Madde whispered "It’s almost time, do you have the pills ready" Jessica nodded.
"What do my little princesses whisper about, is it me?" I sat the wineglass on the table and smiled to them.
"Would you like some soft music"? I turned on a Marvin Gaye CD and soon "Sexual Healing" floated out through the room.
"Now it’s time for a glass of wine." I opened the bottle and poured some in to the glasses.
The red wine shimmered in the candle light.
Jessica sat down in the armchair and Madde on the sofa, I sat down beside her.
"To you my lovely ladies," I said and raised my glass.
And so we toasted to them. "Mmmm that was not too bad," Madde licked her red lips. "Oh how good it would have been if only we had some chips".
She looked at me with pouting lips.
"That’s not so hard to fix." I set my half empty glass on the table and went out for a bowl.
Jessica stood up from the armchair and out of her pocket she took three pills wrapped in paper.
She quickly dropped them in to the glass and sat down again. She made a V-sign to Madde.
"Here come the chips," I sat the large bowl down on the table.
I filled up all our glass with more vine.
"Cheers to you," said both Madde and Jessica and with glittering eyes they raised their glass to me.

Continue in Cpt.7

FootCleaner
11-16-2002, 12:07 PM
Is it possible that by part 15 we might be able to read about some trample or any other form of domination? A slow building story is one thing, be are up to part freakin' 7 here and still nothing.

crushed1
11-16-2002, 2:50 PM
Hey here's a suggestion for you:

a) Be patient and read the chapters as they come out, or wait until several have been posted, so you get to move a long quicker each time you read or,

b) Write a faster moving story of your own, and post it on the board.

Crushed1

P.S. Other than that quit yer bitchin'

groundview
11-16-2002, 6:48 PM
Yes you tell em!!!

Some can only consume.

try writing it if you want it your way!

FootCleaner
11-16-2002, 10:05 PM
OK, I will write my own story. Here is Part 1:

I opened my door to go to the store. It was cold outside. I put on a jacket before I went out. I felt OK after the jacket was on. The light on the corner was red so I stopped. When it turned green I crossed the street.

To be continued....

How did you like my story so far?

crushed1
11-17-2002, 8:39 AM
Nice beginning I am looking forward to the development of your characters. :D

Crushed1

(all sarcasm thet you infer from reading this message was fully intended by the writer. LOL )

FootCleaner
11-17-2002, 1:17 PM
Part II

After I crossed the street, it stopped raining. Then it started again. I saw a girl. She was walking on the other side of the street. she turned the corner and I didn't see her anymore. I walked ointo a store. I bought a pack of gum. I gave the lady at the counter a dollar and he gave me fifty cents change.

To be continued...

dr_mutta
11-19-2002, 2:01 PM
To crushed1.
It looks fine.
Thanks for your help.

To all the rest.
I write the story my way, if you dont like it
thats your problem.

dr_mutta

crushed1
11-20-2002, 6:28 AM
Dear Dr.,

You tell 'em. Unfold the story as you see fit. It is the writers perogative to pace the story the way he sees fit.

Crushed1