Secondhand Slave Question

[dr_mutta]

Hey Friends at this board.
Hope you like the beginning of the story Secondhand Slave.
I would like to ask you for a favor.
Could someone who are good at english help me re.writing the Cpt.s.
If someone could rewrite and then put the story on the board it
would be a grat help for me.
I could compare the differences and maybe do a better translation in the future.
Your friend dr_mutta

[crushed1]

Dr, Mutta,

Although I speak no Swedish, I could polish your rough translations. Things like check spelling, replace some words that are close to the meaning but not used that way in english etc. I was an English Lit major so I have a lot of editing skills. I would only seek to get the feeling of what you re saying right. I promise not to editorialize and change the flow of the story. Let me know if you would like to work with me.

Crushed1

[dr_mutta]

That is just what i Wanted.
If you like the story, and think it´s worth it.
I am glad that you ansvered.
dr_mutta

[crushed1]

Now the only thing is somehow we need to be able to exchange e-mail so I can edit the chapters and get them back to you for your aproval before posting them.

Crushed1