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Tinyjoshua
10-02-2010, 10:37 PM
WARNING: The following contains:
Human Toilet
Bondage
Facesitting (duh)
Farting
Disturbing situations
Ball busting (minor)
Strong language
and more!
"....and as more people keep disappearing, the police continue the search for the 50 missing people".
Fuck i think, more, missing, right in my neighbourhood. Just Fuck.
Im Joe, im a tall, 25 year old. I live in an apartment in NYC by myself. I don't know anybody, i never did. I enjoyed my life, sitting around my house, in my underwear, playing Xbox all day. My Family was rich, so i get sent $500 a week and $25,000 a month, as long as i dont vist them, according to them, im a disease to the family, but fuck them, i dont have to work EVER and i never have to leave my house. Im very skinny for a lazy person, as i dont eat much and exercise every day, dont know why, but i feel its the right thing to do.
I get off the couch and turn the TV off and head to the door, the mail has been delivered. I pick it up and start flipping though it.
Junk
Junk
Junk
Oh whats this
Sexy porn club, naked women and free booze, tonight ONLY.
I check it for any tricks and check the date and place.
Perfect i think, about just down the street and its tonight. I look at my watch, its 8:00 pm, it starts at 10:00, time to get ready. As i head to the shower i hear a knock on the door, i answer it.
"police here, just a daily inspection"
"yes of course come in" I say to the 2 officers.
Since the disserperences, its been mandatory for police to inspect your flat or house, just around the main area of the missing persons. No biggie, im clean, well sorta, its been a few days since my shower.
"seems clean, but i suggest a shower son"
"sure thing, bye" I say and close the door
Fucking morons
I shower
I shave
I get dressed and I go to the place.
I walk and i discover the place is in a really dark alley, just outside the police checking zone.
I knock and a person opens a flap and says "pass please"
I hand him my invitation and he opens the door.
Inside its galore, naked chicks, music and partying. But something strange, all the women have a man tied up on a leash. I ignore it and have some fun. As i walk to the dance floor i feel something hit my head and suddenly i pass out.......

Tinyjoshua
10-02-2010, 10:39 PM
Please review any mistakes, hard to read bits, suggestions and stroy line to follow, this is a story to be made by the community (eg: U say and it gets added). My first real big story :)
This part my seem boring, but next chapter, much better.

THE-FACE-SEAT
10-05-2010, 7:36 AM
Hello I must say the title caught my attention.
Know why?
It has the EXACT same title as another story.
That just happens to be mine.