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Sauur
09-29-2010, 11:31 AM
This story was inspired by Reality TV! It will start slowly but I hope you will enjoy.
PART I
Jerry was quite happy. He was about to embark on the adventure of a lifetime. He was going to take part in one of the most popular “reality” TV shows in the world, Survivor. At the start of the show Jerry was 5 foot 9 and 160 pounds. He was 32 and reasonably healthy. He ran often and loved the outdoors. He had put his name for the Survivor game show and they had actually picked him!
This version of Survivor would take place on an island somewhere in the Caribbean. There he and 15 other “castaways” would have to survive without modern luxuries for up to 60 days. There would be two “tribes” and they would compete, the losing tribe would then have to vote one of their team off the island. Eventually the two teams would merge and individuals would compete for “immunity” from being voted off until the next immunity contest.
Jerry had high hopes of doing well. He knew he was decently fit, a bit shy but everyone said he was a nice guy, and he wanted the adventure to last as long as he could. He had watched previous seasons with dedication. And now he was boarding the boat that would take him and the rest of his “tribe” to the island.
The host of the show was man named Jeff and he shook Jerry’s hand and showed him to a seat on the boat. Soon more contestants had filed in. He announced their ages, names, and careers.
“Ryan is a retired school teacher and 63 years old.” Jerry looked at Ryan and hoped he was still fit enough to help the team.
“Greg is a computer programmer and 25 years old.” Jerry saw Greg as competition but he was fit so if he had his choice he would try to keep the more athletic people around. While it was important to eliminate strong players it was key to have your team beat the other team so you could create a dominate group going into the merge.
“Leonard is an accountant and is 42 years old.” Jerry looked at Leonard and saw a portly man who was already out of breath and they hadn’t done anything yet!
Now it was time to introduce the girls. Jerry was a little bit nervous about this. His shyness always came out strongly when he was around women and more importantly then that was his secret submissive desires. Jerry had strong fetishes. He loved feet, he loved female domination, and he loved the idea of a woman controlling him.
“Barbara is a housewife and is 58 years old.” Barbara was a fit looking dark skinned woman. She was a bit old for Jerry’s tastes however.
“Sara is an attorney and is 41 years old.” He found Sara very good looking for someone is her 40’s. She was a confident brunette with a determined look in her eyes. She stood around 5 foot 10. Jerry could imagine her towering above others in a pair of high heels.
“Nicole is a physical therapist and is 29 years old.” Jerry liked the look of Nicole. She stood 5 foot 3 had shoulder length dark hair and moved with an easy grace.
“And finally we have Jessica; she is a college student and is 21 years old.” If Nicole was good looking then Jessica was phenomenal. She was a voluptuous girl at 5 foot 6. Her full blonde hair bounced as she stepped aboard. Her breasts were large and perfectly proportioned. Her smile displayed her white teeth as she took her seat next to him. He could scarcely breath this was the most gorgeous woman he had ever sat next to! He glanced nervously at her. She also had pink fingernail polish on and he wondered if she had also painted her toes that way…
His thoughts were interrupted by the host, “Hey Jerry quit ogling Jessica and pay attention.” The tribe laughed and Jerry turned red with embarrassment. Jessica smiled her picture perfect smile and said, “Well who wouldn’t want to look at me.” Her casual arrogance sent a thrill down Jerry’s spine.
The host continued. “This is survivor you have to outwit, outlast, and out play. You will be tossed over board where you will have to swim to the beach where you will have the meager supplies your tribe will have to survive on. You will have enough rice for one small meal per person per day. Any other food you will have to find, hunt, or fish on your own. You will also need to carry the few amenities you have. One pot, one pan, your one change of clothes, and the wooden planks you will need for your shelter.”
“The march is a four mile trek to the camp site and will put all of you to the test. After you arrive in camp you will need to build shelter, while the days are quite warm the nights can be rainy and frigid. Rest well for the next day you will have your first challenge. This survivor will be longer, harder, and filled with difficult tests of endurance. Good luck, you are going to need it.”
bluedevil9129
09-30-2010, 12:22 PM
good start! i love survivor, please continue this!
tuvaletkolesi
09-30-2010, 6:38 PM
good start
strawberry
09-30-2010, 6:55 PM
good but more trample pls
Thanks for the feedback guys! Like I said it will start slow but hopefully its still entertaining.
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The tribe all had to jump overboard and make the swim to the beach. It was within site but still quite a bit away. Jerry couldn’t help but imagine Jessica dripping off water in the tight cloths she wore. They would leave little to the imagination. That thought helped Jerry as they made the slow swim to the beach. At this point there was little talking as each member of the tribe tried to save their energy as they swam.
Jerry was determined to get there first so he could have a good view of Jessica rising out of the water. He made it to the island and saw the huge pile of stuff they were going to have to carry. For four hours… wow this was going to be tough he thought to himself. Jerry’s spirits lifted as he saw Jessica make it to the beach.
She gulped in air after her swim and her large breasts rose and stretched the tight wet fabric that was plastered to her skin. He could see her bra and the outline of her nipples. He couldn’t stop thinking about how breathtakingly gorgeous she was. Soon the rest of the castaways were on the beach. Sara, the tall middle aged woman took charge and said, “We need to divide this stuff and get going.”
They divided the load up and set on their way. The men had the heavier loads while the woman took a smaller set due to the strength difference. They talked on the way there, shared stories about who they were, where they came from, and why they had decided to sign up for Survivor. Jerry was most interested in hearing what Jessica had to say. She joined in for the thrill of it. She added in half jokingly, “With a million dollars I’ll never have to work, I can retire before I even start!”
After an hour along the trail Jessica said, “Oh my God do my feet hurt.” Jerry inhaled sharply, this was a terrific opportunity. He responded, “Hang in there, I actually know a bit about reflexology and I can make you feel as good as new back at camp.” Jessica said, “Reflexology? You mean a foot rub?” Jerry got a little uncomfortable by the attention and responded a little less sure of himself, “Um yeah, I mean if you… uh I mean if you want.”
She looked at him for a moment and said, “We’ll see but right now if you want to help do you mind carrying some of my weight, its pretty heavy.” Jerry replied, “Sure no problem.” She unloaded half of what she was carrying into Jerry’s already full backpack. More hours passed. Jerry’s extra load was really starting to take its toll on him. His legs ached, he felt dehydrated, and his breathing was labored. Finally they arrived at their camp site.
Jerry wasn’t the only one exhausted but he had carried the most weight thanks to Jessica. He collapsed down in the sand every muscle in his body crying out with relief. Everyone seemed worn out though Jessica with her lighter load was in the best shape. Ryan said, “All right youngsters I know we are all tired but we need to get camp set up and we are almost out of water, according to the notes here the watering hole is about two miles north of here.”
Everyone groaned but realized work had to be done. The shelter would be built with the wood that they had carried tied together with vines they got from the trees. In addition others worked to find large leaves that could be used to plug in the gaps and make it more water tight. Everyone got to work and the shelter was coming along nicely, however water was running low. The team decided to make the decision of stopping for their first rice meal and then having a couple of people make the hike with the water jugs.
As they all sat down to eat Jessica said, “Hey I remember being promised some TLC for my feet.” Jerry’s heart was hammering. He said, “Yeah uh, I would love, uh yeah.” Nicole laughed a bit at his stumbling; she was the 29 year old woman who in any other company but Jessica’s would have had all eyes on her. Jessica sat down on one of the rice bins and put out her feet. “Well come on take my shoes off.”
Jerry positioned himself as best he could to avoid showing his erection and untied Jessica’s sneakers. As he undid the shoe the smell of stinky feet invaded the immediate area. After all she had been walking for hours in warm weather. Nicole was nearby and said, “Oh man do those stink.” Jessica responded, “I bet you don’t mind, do you Jerry?” With those words she waved her sock feet near his face.
Jerry turned red from embarrassment and muttered out a, “N-No I don’t mind at all Jessica.” Deeply aware he was being recorded for national television he was suddenly very self conscious. He eased back the damp socks from her feet and placed them in her shoes. He then saw the prettiest petite feet he had ever seen. They did in fact have pink toenail polish. They were oh so soft and perfectly proportioned. His self consciousness faded as he lost himself in the moment of desire. He began to rub the sweaty feet of Jessica the college student. He rotated the foot; he rubbed the balls of the feet, pressed deep into the arches with his thumbs, and massaged each toe.
Jessica let out a sigh of satisfaction. “Oh that does feel good.” Nicole said, “I want to be next!” The other women chimed in as well. Jerry was stunned he was going to have four pairs of feet he could massage! This was a dream come true for him. He responded, “Sure I’d love to do that, its all about the team right?”
Aramis
09-30-2010, 9:05 PM
Will be interesting to see where this goes!
grizley
10-01-2010, 10:52 AM
This has a lot of potential. It looks like Jerry may be the last man left if he plays his cards (footrubs) right.
flatworm00
10-01-2010, 4:38 PM
This has the potential to be a really great story. Keep it up
stivalo
10-02-2010, 12:45 AM
i agree with all the previous comments!
greetings!
i'll keep reading :)
The tribe also decided to come up with a tribe name. They were going to call themselves Raki. There were always odds tribe names for Survivor. After the meal the next lady of tribe Raki was to have her feet rubbed. Nicole was also a pretty woman she was 29 years old and wasn’t as hot as Jessica but still good looking in her own right. Her toes were unpainted but her feet were also cute. Nicole’s feet also smelled worse.
Greg the 25 year old was nearby and he said, “Shit that reeks Nicole did something die in your shoe?” The tribe laughed as Nicole threw her shoe at Greg. “Jerk!” They were slick with sweat and even Jerry who had a huge foot fetish; found he was a little nauseated. They really did stink! After her came Barbra the 58 year old black housewife. Her feet were broad and were old. Jerry didn’t mind too much though he didn’t like mature feet. Barbra was very complimentary and said, “Thank you Jerry that was very nice of you.”
The last pair of feet was Sara’s. For someone over 40 she had certainly kept a good figure up. Her feet were a bit larger then Jessica’s. Instead of pink toe polish they were red. His hands were starting to ache from all the massages he was giving! Sara seemed to ignore him as they talked about who was going to get water. He decided to cut the foot rub short but when he set her feet down she just glanced at him and said, “more.” Jerry blushed a bit as he meekly obeyed. The arrogance of the women to just demand that he continue…. Again he had to make an effort to hide his erection.
Jessica volunteered to go for water and Jerry quickly said, “I’ll go too.” Jerry grabbed the two empty water canisters, each could hold about a gallon of water and they set off. Jerry was very pleased that he was going with Jessica, even if it meant another 30 minute hike, it was ‘alone’ time with one of the most gorgeous creatures he had ever seen!
As they walked Jerry said, “I know it’s early in the game but do you want to form an alliance?” Alliances in Survivor were very common as was being backstabbed. But Jerry definitely wanted to be on the same side as Jessica. Jessica pursed her lips and said, “Hmm maybe.” Jerry pressed on, “Making a strong alliance is important, it will help us both!”
Jessica thought about her answer and said, “Well let me think about it. The game just started and I want to see what is going on before I commit to anything.” She turned to Jerry for a moment and moved closer putting her perfectly pink manicured hand on Jerry’s chest and said in a sensual voice, “Even if you’re not in an alliance with me, are you really going to vote me off?”
Jerry swallowed thickly, “Uh, well” it was hard for him to think, “well of uhm of course not.” Jessica laughed lightly and brushed Jerry’s cheek, “That’s what I thought.” Jerry blushed again and they continued walking. While it was true he was infatuated with Jessica he couldn’t allow himself to think with his dick, he needed to stay focused. Easier said then done he thought to himself.
They arrived at the well where they would get the water. They had to lower a small bucket and pull out water then fill the canister. It took about 10 buckets per canister so twenty times Jerry dropped the bucket in and then hauled it up. Of course it was Jerry who did all the work. Jerry didn’t even think about complaining since he wanted to stay on the good side of Jessica.
During that time Jerry made small talk, asking Jessica about what she was studying and what she wanted to do after graduation. He even casually asked if she had a boyfriend. Jessica laughed at that question, “No one I am seeing steady. I’m a bit of a party girl; I don’t know exactly what I want to do after college. Honestly its pretty nice right now, my parents are paying for my college. I have like no expenses, I go out a lot but I never pay for my own drinks so it’s cool.”
Jerry was not surprised, a hot girl like that would have dozens of guys lined up willing to buy her drinks. He also felt a flash of arousal at her statement. She just naturally assumed guys would pay for her drinks just like she assumed Jerry wouldn’t vote her off and that he would be the one doing all the work hauling the water from the well. That attitude, that easy confidence grounded in actual reality that men were putty in her hands was quite arousing in Jerry’s submissive mind.
After finishing with hauling the water out of the well, Jerry grabbed both gallon containers as they both went back to camp and the rest of tribe Raki. Jerry’s breath was a bit labored as they got back to camp. It had been an exhausting day and he was absolutely spent. The rice was waiting for them when they returned.
Both Jerry and Jessica looked at the small little bowl of rice they each had and grimaced. Everyone was starving after all of that physical exertion and this was all there was to eat? Well this was Survivor so he began to eat his meager meal, hoping there would be a chance to maybe find some food on the island.
After the meal they continued working on their living structure. By nightfall it was built and they hoped it was watertight. The weather on the island was warm and humid which was a good thing when night came since they had no blankets or even pillows. Greg suggested that tomorrow they should work on getting more of the large leaves from the trees and bundle them together to work as sleeping mats.
It did not rain on night one so it remained to be seen if the shelter would function properly in stormy weather. For now the eight “castaways” struggled to find a comfortable way to sleep. There was enough room that they could spread out decently enough but the wood did not make for a comfortable night. Jerry lay awake plotting and planning. Who should he make an alliance with? Jessica was beyond amazing in both looks and attitude but was she didn’t seem to want to ally with him.
Greg the 25 year old in great physical shape might be a good ally to have around while they were on teams but when they were all individuals he would be fierce competition. Ryan was a team player who liked to take charge but Jerry couldn’t help but wonder how long a 63 year old could really survive and thrive out here. As much as he tried to focus on strategy and the game he couldn’t help but think about Jessica’s beautiful body and how amazing it was to massage her feet. After hours of tossing and turning the last thought on his mind before he finally succumbed to sleep was Jessica’s pink toenail polish.
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Glad you guys are liking it. Any ideas for Reward and Immunity challenges that might incorporate some fetishes without being too obvious?
superpower34
10-09-2010, 1:52 PM
:) ty, good start
txordi
10-13-2010, 3:41 AM
Very good argument to make a story .... I am eager to continue reading below .... congratulations on these first three parts.
stivalo
10-17-2010, 2:52 PM
please, go on with this plot :)
flatdan
10-18-2010, 4:39 PM
one challenge could involve climbing that required the ladies to stand on him
maniac
10-18-2010, 9:15 PM
Makes me wanna watch survivod again.
Sauur
10-23-2010, 11:45 AM
Time to up the ante. :)
Jerry learned a bit more about his team the next morning. He learned that Sara and Ryan were both morning people. Ryan was getting started on breakfast while Sara the 41 year old attorney who stood at 5 foot 10 inches without heels started to wake people. Groans and attempts to continue sleeping were ignored by the no nonsense woman who went around saying, “Get up, we have work to do. This isn’t a vacation if I am up you need to be up.”
Jerry drowsily looked about. He could tell Sara was enjoying waking people up. Jerry had two thoughts on this. First, it was mega hot that the woman who enjoyed seeing people do something they didn’t want to do. Secondly he was glad she was doing it because the rest of the team was clearly getting irritated with her. He yawned and then looked to see how breakfast was coming along.
A small portion of rice was available. Maybe an ice cream scoops worth. He gobbled it down swiftly and sighed. “Guys we need more food, any idea about what might be edible?” The team discussed it. There was fish out in the ocean but there was not feasible way to catch it at this point. One of the hallmarks of the Survivor series was “Reward Challenges” where the tribes could compete for supplies or food. They all hoped fishing supplies would be one of the potential prizes. Of course they also had not been able to build a fire yet so it was a moot point.
Nicole the 29 year old physical therapist suggested maybe some trees had something edible. “Let’s do some exploring and see what we can find? I mean this is a tropical island right? So there should be pineapples’, bananas and all sorts of things.” The group also needed to get some more water. Jerry was hoping to go with Jessica again but Jessica wanted to explore with Nicole and the others. Jerry ended up going with Sara to get the water. Leonard decided to stay at camp, the 42 year old accountant looked particularly worse for wear.
Jerry attempted to talk strategy with Sara. Sara was businesslike and said, “Well right now the three weakest links are Leonard, Ryan and Barbra. Leonard is a useless slob and the sooner he is out the better.” Jerry nodded, “So you are thinking me, you, Jessica, Nicole and Greg? Sara nodded briskly, “Yes that will give us the best chance to have numbers when the merge occurs. Focus on winning the immunity challenges, get ahead on numbers and then we eliminate all of the other tribe.” Jerry liked the strategy and quickly agreed.
When they got to the well Jerry once again operated the well and dragged up the buckets of water they need to refill their water canisters. Once he was done he suggested, “Well you can carry one and I’ll carry the other.” Sara looked at him, “Oh I see how it is. You’ll carry the cute blonde’s water but you won’t mine?” Jerry was taken aback; he supposed she noticed that he was carrying both canisters when he and Jessica had returned to the camp yesterday. “Oh well… I just thought that uh,” he fumbled as her piercing stare pinned him like a fly to the wall.
Not wishing to alienate his fellow tribe mate and make an enemy he finally said, “Sorry, wasn’t thinking I’ll carry both.” Sara’s cool eyes watched him as he lifted both canisters. They were not incredibly heavy but it was a long walk back and his muscles were already sore from the previous day’s exertions.
He arrived back at camp to a set of glum faces. They had not had much luck in the forest on the island. Jessica looked at Jerry and her face brightened, “I don’t know about the rest of you but my feet are killing me, how about some more foot pampering Jerry?”
Jerry’s heart surged and he did his best not to sound too excited but it still came out way too eager when he said, “Sure I would love to!” Barbra said, “After the show is over you need to teach my husband how to do this.” Jerry gave a nervous laugh and said, “Sure thing.” Greg walked up behind Jessica and said, “Well you can have Jessica’s feet bro, I prefer to give a different type of massage.” With that Greg gently took hold of Jessica’s face and titled her upward as he gave her a long kiss.
Jessica was by no means reluctant. Jerry felt a surge of jealousy flash in him, apparently while looking for food Greg and Jessica had found a connection. Seeing Jessica kiss Greg instead of him really irked him but at the same time the fact that he was meekly massaging her sweaty feet while another man made out with her was deeply arousing.
Nicole made an “Ooooh” sound as Greg and Jessica kissed. “Looks like this island just got a whole lot more interesting!” Jessica laughed as Greg settled behind her and kissed her neck and start giving her a shoulder and back massage. Barbra commented, “Wow you go girl, you’re like the queen of the island right now being all pampered!” Jessica smiled at the compliment and replied, “You know that might not be a bad idea!”
Leonard quirked his head, “What do you mean?”
“Well ancient civilizations structured their tribes, countries or people in certain ways. Today we have a democracy but in this kind of survival situation maybe we shouldn’t decide things democratically,” explained Jessica.
Ryan the older gentleman said, “Well you do have a certain point. If we don’t have to discuss everything before hand we can make quick decisions both around the camp and during the challenges. However I’m the oldest and I’ve seen a lot in my day, if anyone should lead it would be me.”
I kept rubbing Jessica’s feet as she responded to the challenge. “You have said your piece so let’s decide. Who should lead? We’ll decide democratically at first and then whoever gets the most votes for leadership will rule. Does anyone other then Ryan and I wish to be Queen of the tribe?” Nicole barked out a laugh as Ryan fumed. Sara looked as if she was going to throw her hat in the ring as well but decided against it.
Jessica said, “All right since there are no other takers lets see who will vote for me. Greg responded first, “I got your back babe.” Nicole chimed in, “Woohoo girl power I’m with you too.” Jerry added in, “I think Jessica would be a great queen, I’m voting for her.” Jerry saw Sara roll her eyes and then say, “Well me too I suppose.” Jessica now had five votes so it didn’t matter how Barbra or Leonard voted but they quickly supported Jessica as well.
Ryan looked at his tribe and said, “Ah hell. I guess you win for now but we’ll see how good we do in the challenges.” Greg smirked and said, “All hail to the Queen!” Jessica smiled confidently and said, “Greg would you like to be the first to kiss the hand of your queen?” Greg laughed, “Sure thing babe but that ain’t all I’m going to kiss!” Jerry watched jealously as Greg kissed the top of the beautiful blonde’s hand and then leaned in for a long French kiss.
Nicole said, “This is cool, we are making Survivor history!” Jessica extended her hand to Nicole who took the hand and kissed the top of it as well. Nicole giggled and exclaimed, “All hail the Queen of the Raki tribe!” Jessica turned to Barbra and Leonard, “Well, I am waiting.” Leonard looked a bit embarrassed as he took the young hand and kissed it. Barbra laughed and said, “Oh well this is all for fun and games anyway so sure.”
Sara was next and though she grimaced she kissed Jessica’s hand as well. Now there were only two tribe members who had not kissed Jessica’s hand. Ryan and Jerry. Jerry made to rise up and kiss Jessica’s perfectly manicured hand. As he did so Jessica snapped her fingers and said, “Hey you’re not done with my foot rub!” Jerry reddened at the embarrassing position he was in but remained at her feet and continued rubbing.
Secretly though he was immensely turned on. Nicole laughed at Jerry’s meekness and upped the ante when she said, “Hey since Jerry is down there instead of kissing your hand you should have him kiss your feet!” Jerry felt his pulse quicken. He definitely wanted to kiss the wonderful feet but he didn’t want to appear too eager either. He stammered in fake protest, “F-feet? I uh don’t know about that.”
Jessica asked, “Why not Jerry?” Jerry looked around as his tribe mates and several cameras watched. “Uh well you know they are feet, but I guess if you really want me to…” Jessica looked straight into Jerry’s eyes; he could tell that she could see right through his façade. With a knowing smirk she said, “Kiss it ‘foot boy’.” Jerry reddened and gently kissed the tops of Jessica’s feet. His penis grew as he kissed those delicate pink painted toes.
Cruelly Jessica noticed the erection and then said on national television, “I know you like my feet Jerry now stand up and show the world.” Jerry was stunned by her command; he could only stare at her with his jaw open. Nicole said, “Oh my God really? Is that why you offered to rub all of our feet so you can get off on it? Jerry felt his cheeks burning as they turned crimson. Despite the humiliation or maybe because of it his erection would not fade. Jessica said, “Obey the Queen of the Raki tribe! Stand up and show the world how much you like feet!” She looked at him coldly, “Or do you want to be voted out, because disobedience means leaving the island.”
Jerry swallowed thickly and then stood up. The cameras could clearly see the pop-tent in his shorts. Nicole laughed while Sara had a look of disgust on her face. Barbra was bemused by the whole situation having never heard of men liking feet like that. Sara walked up to him and said, “You pathetic little twerp. Getting off on something while masquerading as just being helpful you sick pervert.” Jerry was caught off guard as her full armed slap rocked him.
Jerry briefly wondered if the camera crew would interfere but they didn’t. Sara walked away angrily from the camp. Jerry was deeply shamed and he knew that everyone back at home would learn of his foot fetish. He slunk away from camp lost in his own thoughts. Jessica smiled as she watched him go. On the surface it looked like she had made an enemy but she knew that he would not be absolute putty in her hands.
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tuvaletkolesi
10-24-2010, 1:08 PM
great chapter! hope you continue!
insoleforwomen
11-12-2010, 7:32 AM
Very good please go on.
maddog4056
11-22-2010, 7:58 AM
This story is good. Hope you finish it.
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