Running out of ideas

[bill512]

Boy am I running out of story ideas ...

In that movie "Something Wicked This Way Comes" a circus director has a bodyguard like Serafin beauty with strange seductive powers. I thought maybe of taking that one step further and introducing face sitting into her magical arsenal. Kind of like the Ullitek story idea I had a while back of an ugly demon that's desguised as a beautiful woman, who sucks people's souls up in a facesit to be delivered to the devil. But less a military like role of "yes sir, no sir" and more a relationship like deal between two titan personalities. He worries about her. He's scared of her. And she only keeps him around for his salesmanship (to get the customers aka victims) to feed her hunger.

In maintaining the great spirit of the outdoors, I thought another fitness type story about a cop who's investigating a string of murders in upstanding suburbia. His investigation leads him to a gym, a beautiful blonde fitness fanatic and her need for jogging partners, and a trail in the woods little known by anyone but her. Where victims are treated to a black belt's sudden fury, and beaten to the point of submission. For a strange face sit smother fantasy of murder.

The Worrisome Touch - Another Star Trek episode about an anxiety inducing woman from a planet of first contact. Able to drive people insane by just a look and a mood, this long dark haired black eyed beauty and ambassador is as much intrigued by the crew of the San Juan, as they are with her. But by the time they reach star base for opening negotiations, she'd have discovered the source of her superwoman like power over them as being of a purely sexual nature. And fate won't be able to stand it. Destiny will give in to the tease. And she'll touch. At first, a young security chiefs thigh unknowingly with her opened leg under naked skirt and in secret. But then, over mouth and face. To watch and feel the strange and magical mix of their two races, and her exquisite domination. The San Juan is doomed ... It never returns.

[bill512]

One of the really neat things, I think anyway, about the face sitting fetish is the level of control. Look at those "Happy Facesitting" pictures and take note that that guy is disappeared. Gone. And she's not a large woman. She's not even average. She's a small woman. Five five maybe? But that guy's head is gone and buried, and she's in charge. Once thought a cute and tomboyish like charmer of vibrant womanhood, life of the party, woman of trend and happy fashion, she gets you alone and in a playful mood and BAM! Now a dominator. Ugly. Sadistic. Merciless beauty. It kinda puts your heart on a platter.

That's the kinda story I'd like to see, and write. As a society, we have so much trust placed in this kind of a person, we give them too much for granted in our characterizations. In our presumptions of guilt and innocence. The perfect cover for a murderers role. Because the genius of it isn't genius of the psychological. But of the physical. Of the seducing. It's kind of "The Law of First Impressions". She'd be devistating. Never doubted. Never accused. Like a bird in a cage with the cage door opened, but a bird of prey.

If I was a really good writer, that's what I'd write. A portrayal of cuteness and helplessness, kinda the sexy lady that walks into the barbars shop asking for directions and the whole place of boredom explodes. She sees that. And she uses it. Not even being supernatural, she has supernatural powers. And always gets her victim into an overtrusting and hopeless situation. To have her way with him.

Really sexy ...

[knight2one]

this story could be really good

[smotherman]

Bill


You`re a great story writer!The "Cop investigating string of murder" story sounds like it would be great.

[nosypucker]

bill512:

You may not notice it yourself because you're too close to it, but those of us reading your stuff can see that you're improving almost story by story. If you go back and look at the first stories you posted on this forum, I think you'll be able to see yourself that you could write them better today.

But I wonder if you might not be doing too much discussing of the various plots and not enough writing about them. The first time through a story the writer should make all the choices. Don't ask for directions or show indecision...write and rewrite the story! I think you'll find that you'll get a lot more written that way, and that you'll be a lot happier with the product. If you wait and let the readers comment on the finished story, you'll get a lot better criticism.

But don't stop writing them! Change your viewpoint sometimes, or deliberately vary your endings; do something to keep your own interest sharpened. But turn them out regularly, and keep at it!

[bill512]

thanks Nosy, knight, and smotherman. Here's some notes for the setup of #2. Don't know what I'm gonna call it yet. :)

The Elephant - A metaphor. Not beastiality but analogy. Diet (huge industry). Conditioning. Stencil. Cosmetics. Psychological stimulus. Psychology and Psychiatry (huge industry). The notion that a woman's purpose is a man's pleasure, setting aside the condition of love, loneliness, and mutual relationship. Mutual understanding. The notion that a human being (not just a woman) is more than just what's on the outside. But what's on the inside as well. Close up. Saddlebaum. The foxy babe that looks staggering from afar, takes off her cloths and opens wide her beauttocks, and wammo! She ain't pretty no mo. And she's deadly. Her foot in the door to your soul. The elephant is a metaphor for stardome and first impressions. Completely undermining intellectual growth. Equality. Civil Rights. The High School mentality of socialization and acceptability. Jocks and the Geeks. That's how the media appears to most people all over the world (not just in America). That everything is pretentious. Romantic. Soap. Baseball. The corked bat. The lady that can crank out cry at the flick of a switch. The guy who catches the home run ball and gets his life threatened. The Peticoat. Law. Industry. Deliberate ignorance and choice of the negative. The Queen's sex life. The accused's expected reactions. Status Quo.

Every woman in America has an elephant on her shoulders. She's gotta be this. She's gotta be that. She's gotta pretend this and that, to keep her man. To be a success. To break free and be independent. Laws weren't written by hands, but by snout. Well, it's her time to straddle. Let the hair grow. Smother them in reality. Saturate them. Make them see what the real world is. What they're really after.

That's why she's pissed. It's political. The female Jesus. She's profiled and unbagged, and she's out to getcha. And getcha good, wrapping herself around your face and suffocating you.

Her name is Jane, and she jogs. And if you really want to piss her off, tell her it's because she wants to look good for men ...