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vloerkleed
06-24-2010, 10:37 AM
(This is a story written by me together with a mistress. We did this in a simple way: I started the story from my point of view and send it to her, then she wrote a little bit more from her point of view and send it back to me, and so on, and so on)

After a hard day at work, where not everything went well, it was good to be home. She puts her key in the lock and opens the door. Just before stepping into the house she looks down and there was her personal doormat. “Welcome” was written clearly on it. Smiling she looks at it and the doormat smiles back. She is so glad that she had this doormat for nothing; it is useful for so many things, and what’s more……he can be affectionate as well!



A warm welcome as you come home gives a good feeling. It will, however, take a lot of time and effort to turn this doormat into the perfect slave. Fortunately, he is willing and does have a delightful body, which is very attractive when visitors are here. The question is, how far will he go for me?



After stamping my feet to remove the snow from my boots I stepped away from you and turned around. You gently raised each of my legs and removed my boots. I took off my wet coat draping it across your back leaving a trace of melted snow. You had already fetched my favourite mules and laid them out by the door and when I was ready you carefully slipped them on for me. With everything in place I walked on down the hall with you following me like a dog. The unwritten rule in my house is that you never walk upright in my presence, unless of course, I command you to do so.

I wandered into the lounge and flopped down on the settee, next to the table with the big chandelier. I gestured to you to come and stand on all fours in front of me so that I could rest my feet on your back. The heels of my mules dug in a little, leaving indents in your flesh. You had earlier placed my post on the settee and I leisurely sorted it looking for anything interesting.

After a few minutes you sat up straight and started to speak without being invited to do so.



“Madam I know I am here to serve and be your doormat but you are using me as your footstool with your heels digging in my back. I think there must be some kind of misunderstanding.”

Initially you were taken aback by this insolence, but the very idea of me taking my own initiative really got to you. You stood up threw the pile of envelopes on the floor and kicked me hard in the chest. I fell over and hit my head on the floor and shouted at you!

“Stupid woman! What kind of bullshit is this?”

This kind of reaction from a doormat was totally unacceptable. You put your foot on my throat and pressed down hard and in a low voice you said. “You have a big mouth, don’t you? Apparently you are not aware why you are here, and more importantly, ignorant about the rules in my house.”

You increased the pressure on my throat until I started to splutter; You let me suffer for a few minutes and then stood fully on my chest still with some weight pressing into my throat. My breathing was ragged and I grabbed your ankles to try and throw you off. You reacted quickly and kicked me under the chin. “Just stay calm.” you growled. “I will carefully explain to you what your role is here and what the house rules are. Is that clear?”



I stepped off as standing on your chest was a little unstable, it was important to remain totally in control and not to let this outburst from you show any weakness in me. You needed to know who made the rules and it clearly was me. After all what are you? Just a doormat, something to be used whenever I choose. However, it’s a pity not to exploit your potential. I definitely see possibilities you are pure still, a virgin, a rough diamond, and you have no idea of what you are capable of. For me it is a challenge to tame you.

I stared at you totally expressionless without saying a word. This silence had more impact than any screaming or shouting. Slowly your hands moved upwards to feel your bruised throat and chin. “Put your hands down,” I said firmly. You obeyed immediately but I could see the turmoil in your eyes. Slowly you started to move your hands back up again. “Get them down and keep them down.” I said even more firmly.

I put my foot on your chest and pressed down. It was obvious that my icy gaze made you uncomfortable and you kept turning your head away. I grabbed your chin and held it firm so that you faced me directly. I could detect a rebellious streak in you and I knew that I needed to be precise, confident and constantly aware that at any moment you might try to resist.

“Listen and listen carefully, I will only tell you this once! You are her because you want to serve me. You volunteered to be here out of your own freewill and therefore you are mine. I will use you whenever and wherever I see fit. You will serve me in every possible way. You can be my doormat, my slave, an appliance or a piece of furniture. When it takes my fancy you might even be allowed to share my bedroom. On these occasions I will decide if you will be in my bed to comfort me or as my floor mat next to my bed. You will never pass comment on my decisions. I will not tolerate disobedience in any way and any transgressions will be severely punished. I will make extreme demands on you but will always respect your physical limits. If not, you can still leave now. If you decide to stay you become my absolute property. I will decide then when it is time to leave you at the wrong side of the doorstep. Wherever possible I will push you to your limits. Is that clear?”

With my foot leaning heavily on your chest I could feel how fast your breathing was. Each time I wanted to emphasize a word I pressed a little harder, with each extra push you moaned softly. At the end of my speech I squeezed your face hard to make clear that I expected an answer, and I expected it NOW!

“Yes Madam, it is clear.” You mumbled softly.

“Good. You belong to me now and I will love you, but it will always be on my terms.” I answered firmly.

I took my foot off of your chest and pushed it into your crutch just hard enough to make you wince. “Go and fetch me some coffee,” I commanded sternly “and before you go, pick up these envelopes and put them on the table.”

With everything neatly in place you headed for the kitchen on all fours. I was curious to see how you will manage to bring me coffee as you must remain on all fours whilst in my presence, I smiled at the thought as I opened each envelop in turn and listened to you in the kitchen busy with your preparations.

(to be continued)

LuvsHerHeels
06-25-2010, 1:50 PM
very good start...please continue...thanks.

flatworm00
06-25-2010, 3:25 PM
very interesting concept...fun to read.

vloerkleed
06-28-2010, 6:40 AM
(This is a story written by me together with a mistress. We did this in a simple way: I started the story from my point of view and send it to her, then she wrote a little bit more from her point of view and send it back to me, and so on, and so on)

Part II
Slightly touched with my new fate, I try to make some coffee. Easier said than done because the coffeemaker has been but at the far edge of the sink. I sit up straight a little to make things easier. What I said “Yes Mam”at, a few minutes ago is still stirring my mind. I try to get things clear: I can be used for anything. Well, my madam is not such a heavy person, so that would not be the biggest problem. I am determined to keep quiet for a while and do as you command me to.

In the meantime you have full sight on what is going on in the kitchen and you observe me. “Whilst the coffeemachine is running you come overhere because my mules can use some cleansing.” you say to me.

I’m nodding. Put the coffee and the water in the machine and turn it on. I crawl back to you again and lie down on my belly at your feet.

“What are you doing? Did I tell you to lie down?” you sneer at me. “Come on, on all fours and lick off my mules. And don’t you dare to lick my toes, those you have to deserve!”

I do as I am told and sit on all fours again. You put one foot on my shoulder and the other one is dangling in front of my face. Situation almost similar as before you told me what my purpose in this house will be.

Your heel is dug in my shoulder and whilst licking your mule I take a look at you. I see a beautiful woman, reading her mail. At first you don’t notice my staring but then, all of a sudden you push me fiercely putting your heel in my shoulder.

“Did I tell you to look at me, little rug? Don’t do this again untill I tell you so.”

Immediately my eyes are fixed at the floor and continue licking off you mules.

Then you tell me to fetch the coffee. I lower your foot gently, turn around and crawl back to the kitchen.

I poor the coffee and return with two cups on a tray. Crawling like this is hard, but moving carefully might give me a chance not to spoil anything.


I observe your efforts and now you will fail anyway. I asked you to make some coffee, but who said there might be a cup for you as well? I wait until you reach me and have put my cup at the table next to me. The minute you want to put down your cup of coffee I take it from your hand and poor the content in front of your face on the floor tiles. You give me a surprised look in return.

“Did I tell you to get yourself something? I don’t think so. You may lick the spilling on the floor if you still want some.”

With a punch from my foot against your shoulder I turn you around and with my other foot I kick your ass. Desperate you bow your head and start licking the drops of spilled coffee. I step next to your head and put one foot in your neck.

“If there is just one tiny drop left on this floor, you won’t drink anything for a while. Apparently one cup of coffee turns out to be to much for you. Lie down on your stomach, now!”

You obey immediately and slowly I walk with my jagged mules over your back, starting at your shoulder blades towards your hips. I wait a while till I have sunk both heels in your butt and step away from you. I hear you exhale and enjoy your soft moaning. Quickly you continue your licking up the spilled coffee and I set myself at the settee again, watching you and drinking my coffee.

After finishing my coffee I think you’ve had enough time to hang out like a rag and it is about time for something else.

“Over here, rag!” I command you.

You sit in front of me on your hands and knees.

“From now on you will come to me if I call “HERE” and you will lie down on your back. If I should want it otherwise you will know. So……..” and I give you a nasty look.

You lie down on your back in front of me immediately and before you have time to settle I put one foot on your tummy already. I feel myself sink in while your muscles are not prepared to anticipate my weight. Those muscles need some exercise to be turned into a sixpack for a start. My second foot joins the other, first the ball of my foot followed by the heels on which my entire weight is resting now. Time for a less wobbly foundation so I move to your chest.

I put my feet a little apart and see you throw a look underneath my skirt. I haven’t had time to change my clothes after coming home from work, so there is not much to see that might be interesting as far as I am concerned. But for a submissive character like you even the sight of a pair of lace knickers and hold ups can be enough to be aroused by them. I notice the change in your breathing and see the greedy look in your eyes. With my right foot I push your head aside, step on it and diminish your frank view under my skirt.

“Follow me and take the dirty cups with you.” I step away from you and without waiting I leave the room.

(to be continued)

door_step
06-29-2010, 5:56 AM
Thanks for the story vloerkleed.:bananajum

Look forward to some real use as a doormat:thumbsup2:

Doorstep

vloerkleed
07-04-2010, 10:42 AM
(This is a story written by me together with a mistress. We did this in a simple way: I started the story from my point of view and send it to her, then she wrote a little bit more from her point of view and send it back to me, and so on, and so on)

I crept into the kitchen carrying a tray with two cups on; you were just standing in the middle of the room waiting for me with your hands placed firmly on your hips. Just as I was putting the tray onto the work surface one cup toppled over and fell to the ground. It instantly broke into a multitude of pieces. Immediately I felt the tension in the room rise and I looked ashamed at the mess I had made on the floor and waited for your reaction.

You turned slowly and faced me. “What kind of useless rag are you? Can’t you do anything right?” you said sternly. I stole a glance at you but quickly turned away, “Yes Mam”. I mumbled, looking at the floor.

“So I see, carrying out simple instructions is clearly not your strongest point, punishment is needed!” “Lie on your back on top of that broken cup”.

I obeyed and felt the broken china dig into me just between my shoulder blades. It was very sharp and unpleasant! To make matters worse you stepped on my chest. You could easily see from the grimace on my face that your weight pressing from above and the sharp broken pieces below gave me considerable pain.

“This will teach you not to break anything else”. You sneered.

Whilst you were speaking I tried to raise my upper body slightly to reduce the pressure. Lucky for me you were not too heavy but unfortunately you felt me trying to raise myself up and you were absolutely not amused!

“Rag, stay flat, make sure your whole body is totally flat” you commanded.

I pretended not to have heard but you knew I had and that I was just being disobedient. With this kind of behavior stronger measures were clearly needed.

“So my little doormat didn’t hear me, did he?” you queried, raising one eyebrow.

(to be continued)