Traffic Stop: The Concert, Part 2

[ajjones2]

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[Heckron]

Oh my god AJ, amazing story so far and this is just the car ride!

I can't wait man!

Heckron

[ogilthorpe]

A really neat story
A brave new world where men are helpless and endlessly walked upon---a brilliant utopian vision.
I sort of hope that he survives long enough to allow his wife to repent her reactionary ways.

[Ste Letto]

aj,

I love the way you capture the immense physical presence and dominance of your female characters. This story has a nice edge to it, a bit twilight zone, almost the world we know but not quite.

I think any story is a bit like Alice in Wonderland, there's a rabbit hole to fall down, and an altered world to discover.

I have to hold my hand up and say it was me who wrote an alternate ending to Traffic Stop. Thanks for saying you quite liked it. I understand exactly what you meant though when you said it wasn't YOUR ending. These worlds can become immensely personal, I know mine do and I imagine you feel just the same.

I will say that I wouldn't feel at home in many people's fantasy realities, but yours hooked me.

Finally, I love the way you've picked this one up again. I captured something of the feel of the original series, but it seems this world is fuller and richer in your hands.

Good luck with it.

Your chum

Ste L