Trample Trance

[wormee]

Wrtten by a friend of mine after after her first trampling (of me) Although the cock crushing didn't happen till our second time.


His skin yields to the crushing blows,
my boots landing, making themselves at home in his skin,
then leaving, and landing again,
his groans start to escalate in volume,
and the beat drums on,
moving faster now, more deliberately,
you grab the bars above your head,
and you sway to the music,
lost in a trance, chin stuck out and eyes ablaze,
you want this, you need this,
almost as much as he does,
you yearn to leave your marks deeply embedded in his flesh,
it makes you feel alive, invigorated,
you love it,
his skin is tender now, and his dick hard,
you smile slowly, almost evily,
as you crush it into the floor, grinding it with the toe of your boot.

[tbone]

Nicely done. Love that she gives us her feelings instead of just describing them.

[flatworm00]

Wow...really great!

[Z-Boy]

It's a nice little poem... but yet, it's rather short.

Also, I'm not trying to be a grammer nazi, but you never say the word "you" to point out someone in a narrative tone. You should say "one" instead.

For example:
it makes one feel alive, invigorated,
one loves it,
his skin is tender now, and his dick hard,
one smiles slowly, almost evily,

[Firestorm]

Use of the second person flies in poetry.

Thanks for the post, it's something different. I for one like it.