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Atalmus
04-30-2010, 8:43 PM
C:\>This one starts a little slow...sorry.

We'd been dating for about a month, and I'd spent most of that time waiting for the other shoe to drop. She seemed perfect: a fiery pixie with a nerdy streak and a off-kilter sense of humor. Even though she was twenty-four-- two years younger than me-- she seemed much more mature than other women I'd met online. In particular, she didn't play the silly mind games that had always tripped me up in my previous relationships. She thought my social awkwardness was cute, and she never misunderstood or misled me.

It had occurred to me that, maybe, she was too good to be true. I was a slightly out of shape IT guy with nothing but my smart-ass personality to my credit. She was an amazingly pale-skinned natural redhead, and she kept her shoulder-length hair styled chaotically to give her a punk rock look. She was a little shorter than me, and slender. She was always so frenetic, like a firecracker locked perpetually mid-explosion.

Suffice it to say, I was in love. I didn't realize it at the time, but it was true nonetheless. So, when I was lying in her bed and she climbed on top of me all those years ago, she could've talked me into anything.

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We were in her apartment, as usual. Mine was a bachelor pad, with enough furniture to support my hobbies of sleeping and messing around on my computer. I guess I didn't have much of a life until she came along...and, even then, I only really lived when I was around her.

We had been lying in her bed, watching Point Break and making fun of Keanu Reaves endlessly. The movie cut to commercial and she clicked the TV off. I was still catching my breath from the last bout of laughter; she was the only woman I knew who could make me laugh that hard.

Without warning, she rolled over and climbed atop me. We'd had sex before, so this wasn't an entirely new situation, but she had an odd look on her face. She bit her lip anxiously and stared down at me, her brilliant green eyes locked onto mine.

"We need to talk," she said after a moment. She was braless, with a white t-shirt and white panties. I could feel her nipples against my bare chest through her shirt. She was excited, but the tone of her voice made me a little nervous.

"Isn't 'we need to talk' usually a bad omen? If we're about to have a fight, I think you're giving mixed signals," I joked. I hoped she was setting me up for some sarcastic joke, which she occasionally did, but this was more tense than usual. I had gotten hard before she started talking, and my ambivalence over the situation hadn't dampened my arousal at all (after the first time we'd slept together, she'd given me the nickname "Energizer Cock").

"I didn't want you to think this was going to be one of those talks, so I decided to pin you down to make you more agreeable." I could feel her heart thrumming as she rested her weight on me and brought her face closer to mine. She was very nervous about something. "But seriously, I need to come clean about something, and I don't know how this is going to go. I like you a lot, and I get the impression--" here she flexed her pantied crotch against my boxer-covered hardon--"that you like me a lot, too."

My heart started to race with hers at the phrase "come clean". There was very little chance this conversation would end someplace good.

"I do like you, but I think you know me well enough to know I'm not going to fly off the handle or anything," I reassured her.

"Ok, well--"

"I can't believe you! We're through!" I interrupted as soon as she started speaking. She stared at me, mouth agape. "Sorry, that was reflex...please, continue." My smartass outburst seemed to actually put her more at ease.

"Before I do..." she leaned back to straddle me, just above my waist. Reaching behind her, she slipped her hand into my boxers and firmly gripped my balls. "...now, if you decide to interrupt again, I'll just give you a little squeeze." She said it with a mischievous grin on her face, and gave me a tiny, painless squeeze to punctuate her threat. This was a little out of character for her, but I certainly wasn't complaining. "As I was saying...I need to come clean. I haven't completely been myself. I guess you could say I was acting 'normal' so you wouldn't be intimidated. I think you've been dropping some hints, though, that it'd be ok for me to be a little more myself."

She stared at me a few moments before I realized that she was waiting for a response.

"I'm sorry, I don't understand," was all I could think of. It was true, though: I had no clue what she was talking about.

"I like to be a little dominant. That's how I usually am, but I really didn't want to scare you off. I know you've said you're inexperienced and all that, and I don't want to rush this...but I'd like to start exploring that kind of relationship with you, if that's alright. It's entirely up to you...I just wanted to put it out there and hope for the best." As she finished, I got the distinct impression that she'd practiced this speech in her head a few times before working up the courage to actually ask me.

So, there she sat, looking down at me with her beautiful green eyes, straddling me and still gripping my balls in her pale, delicate hand. I didn't realize it then, but that was a startlingly accurate portrayal of our future relationship.

She was my firecracker, and I was smitten. I couldn't bare to disappoint her. Besides, I couldn't conceive of her doing anything to me that I'd actually dislike. The idea of her tying me up and using me as a sex slave was an immense turn-on.

"As long as you promise not make me the star of a snuff film, I think I'm ok with it," I said with an air of faked exasperation.

"No promises," she joked, and gave my balls a firmer squeeze than before. There was a tiny bit of pain for just an instant, then she let go and leaned forward to kiss me. She sucked my tongue into her mouth and bit it gently with a grin for just a moment before releasing it.

"Let's worry about all of that tomorrow, so you can have something to be nervous about. Tonight, you can enjoy your last night as my equal." As she spoke, she brought her mouth closer and closer to mine, her words growing quieter and quieter, until they were nothing but breath. Her eyes never left mine.

I was lost in her. Otherwise, I might have been a little more attentive about that last bit.

Sauur
04-30-2010, 8:54 PM
Great story I can't wait for more!

Slackjaw
05-01-2010, 12:57 PM
Fantastic!

leo_sub
05-01-2010, 4:18 PM
Great start

Atalmus
05-02-2010, 1:47 AM
C:\> Glad you guys like it so far. This is still "part 1", just the second chapter. Also, I meant this part to go further, but I have to cut it short because I've been up about 25 hours, and I'm dozing off as I type. I promise the next chapter will have more of the good stuff.

Part 1: Chapter 2: (Manchester United: 3. Shit, nevermind)

Unfortunately, she wasn't able to make good on her threat/promise of introducing me to her dominant personality the next day since I had to work. In fact, I wasn't able to see her again until the next weekend.

As I endured a week of soul-crushing office work, my mind kept returning to her vague revelation. I hadn't thought about it before, but I was starting to think that I was a little on the sexually submissive side-- that must have been what she'd meant when she said I was "dropping hints".

She had told me so little that I unwittingly filled in the blanks with my own fantasies. I started to second guess my decision and think myself in circles throughout the day. As soon as I got back to my apartment every night, I spent hours looking up femdom porn on the internet, to see if it was something I'd actually enjoy when the time came.

It was pointless, though. Some of the videos were great: women forcing men to worship their breasts and vaginas...things I didn't mind doing to her, anyway, but others were downright brutal or disgusting. I tried to put it out of my mind and just focus on getting through the week, but my brain refused to stop churning out fantasies and kept me up (in every sense of the phrase) almost all night, every night.

Needless to say, I was a bit of a wreck when I showed up at her apartment that weekend.

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She answered the door wearing a red silk robe that I'd never seen before. It was open in the front, and I could see she was nude underneath.

"No offense, but you look like someone beat you up in your sleep," she greeted me with a mischievous grin and a slightly hungry look in her eyes.

"What sleep?" It was the best I could muster in the way of a witty reply. I'd gotten about two hours of uninterrupted sleep last night. Under other conditions, I might have rescheduled for tomorrow, but another day of waiting would've just driven me insane. I had to know what she was going to do with me. Or to me.

"Ohhh, poor baby," she cooed "don't worry about it. You can stay here tonight. It'll give us more time for fun!" She gave an adorable giggle while throwing her arms around me and leading me into her living room, kicking the door shut at the same time. "Just have a seat here and we can have a quick talk before the festivities," she chirped as she lead me to a seat at her dinner table. "While I'm talking, you should go ahead and get undressed," she added, after a moment of consideration. She took a seat at the other end of the oak table and began reciting another obviously practiced speech:

"First off, since I really really don't want to scare you off, I wanted to let you know that me being a domme only applies here. I won't talk down to you in public or anything like that. This is a very private aspect of my personality, and I want to share it with you." She had been sitting with her legs crossed, but here she paused to open them and lean forward, resting her elbows on her knees and letting the open robe hide the details of her body in maddening shadow.

"Second, you can stop at any time if you start to get overwhelmed. Just say 'yellow' if you want me to slow down, or 'red' if you need me to stop immediately." She paused again as I finished undressing. She motioned me to take a seat opposite her, and eyed my erection with a smirk as I sat down.

"Looks like you're already a little ahead of me," she said with a raised eyebrow.

"Hey. I'm an average ahead of you, lady." I was starting to feel a little more awake as the moment of truth came nearer.

"Lady. Hmm," she mused thoughtfully. She crossed her legs again, pointing one dainty, bare foot at me and letting the robe slide off it to reveal a beautifully pale, slender leg. She absentmindedly swayed her foot back and forth as she continued. "That brings me to point number three: once we get started, you'll address me as "ma'am", and I'll address you as..." she stopped abruptly and dropped her gaze to the floor. The next word was muttered too low for me to hear. I asked her to repeat it.

"...bitch." She raised her voice a little, but she was obviously still embarrassed. "You call me ma'am, and I'll call you 'bitch'. Her voice grew a little firmer. I suppressed a chuckle. It was a little absurd, but also a little reassuring: she may have known she was a domme, but she was obviously still feeling it out, and exploring exactly what she was comfortable with. At least we'd be exploring together, instead of her starting out miles ahead of me, just waiting for me to catch up.

"Now," she composed herself and pointed her foot at me, bobbing it with each word as she spoke, "once you're ready, get down on your knees in front of me, and we'll get started."

easy2plz448
05-02-2010, 2:04 AM
brilliant, brilliant start. Please keep going

macrina
05-02-2010, 5:59 AM
Great so far. Thank you.

new_slave09
05-02-2010, 3:39 PM
eager to hear more

Atalmus
05-09-2010, 4:19 AM
C:\> Sorry for the delay in getting this part out. I had written it once, then my browser crashed when I tried posting it and I lost the whole thing. I was a little too frustrated to go back and immediately re-write it. Either way, here we go...

Part 1: Chapter 3: (Westminster 7...fuck it...no one is going to get that reference)


I slid off the chair and on to my knees in front of her. As soon as I was down on the cool, hardwood floor, I realized why she had decided to start out here instead of in the bedroom. She currently had the living room lit by a single floor lamp situated behind her, which had created those obnoxious shadows that prevented me from getting a good look at her before. From this angle, the light was right behind her head, making it impossible to look her in the face without being blinded.

Instead, I looked down to her foot, which was now level with my eyes and only a few inches from my face.

"Now, bitch, start by showing me you know your place. Suck my toes." There was only a tiny hesitation when she called me 'bitch' this time. She was getting more sure of herself.

I was a little nervous, but this was one of the things I'd seen online, and it didn't seem so bad. Besides which, I could smell her scented body wash from here: it was obvious she was very self conscious about her hygiene and intent on making sure this was an enjoyable experience for both of us.

I reached out with my hands to guide her toes to my mouth and she surprised me with a gentle kick to the forehead with the ball of her foot.

"That's strike one: I didn't say to use your hands. Hands are what people use, and you're just my bitch when you're here. You use your mouth for everything, unless I say otherwise." She didn't hesitate to call me 'bitch' this time. In fact, her voice was much firmer and...cheerful? She seemed to be enjoying herself, regardless. For some reason, this turned me on even more, though I was more than a little embarrassed by her scolding.

"What happens when I get three strikes?" I asked as I put my arms behind my back. I immediately regretted speaking; I hate how stupid I can be, sometimes.

She kicked me in the head again, hard enough to cause some mild pain.

"Who were you just talking to, bitch? It couldn't have been me, but I swear I don't see anyone else here," she feigned confusion.

"Sorry, um...what happens when I get three strikes, ma'am?" I repeated. This was humiliating. If I was playing this part with anyone but her, I'd have quit immediately.

"Ohhh, so you were talking to me, but you forgot what you were. That's strike two. Also, you decided you could talk, when we both know you're only supposed to do what you're told, so that's strike three. Wow, that's amazing!" She seemed positively gleeful, now. She uncrossed her legs again and leaned forward, grabbing me by the chin and forcing me to look her in the eye. "After three strikes, you have to pay a toll to earn forgiveness." She released me and leaned back again, crossing her legs and bringing her foot in front of my face again. "But we can worry about that later tonight. You need show me you understand the basics. Suck each toe, and after each one, tell me what you are. Don't move to the next to until I say to. Now, bitch, get suckin' " As she said the last word, she shoved her foot in my face, mashing my lips against my teeth when I didn't open my mouth fast enough. She gave a cute little giggle at my surprise.

I was humiliated, and I hadn't even done anything yet. Nothing had been performed, either pleasure or punishment, and I was already ashamed, yet incredibly aroused. Judging by the outline of her nipples poking against her robe, I could tell she was turned on, too.

I opened my mouth and did as I was told. I started sucking her big toe, knowing that the dynamic of our relationship had irrevocably shifted.

Castor
05-19-2010, 6:24 PM
please more!