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jimmybom
04-24-2010, 1:58 PM
Hi everyone ! I am new here and to the fetish itself. I wish to contribute a story but English ain't my first language, so, kindly bear with me. All characters and incidents are fictional and all characters are atleast above 18 years, as far as age is concerned.

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The Apartment.

"Room 756 ?"

"Just across the corridor, when you reach the last one, that should be it...ah...Excuse me, can I ask your good name please ?"

"Sure....Hi ! I'm Jordan. Just arrived in the city a few days back. New to this place."

"Ah ! Thought as much. Never seen you around. Well, I'm Ron. Been here since a year."

"Ok. I'm here to meet Miss Jessica. I suppose, she had published an advert in the local newspaper for renting a room. So, just thought to meet her first before finalizing the deal."

"That's great and wierd too ! I mean, she's a girl. How would she allow a lad to share her apartment, except that you are her boyfriend ! Are you ....??"

"No, no....I understand what you are trying to get at and even I was surprised at first seeing the advert. But, when I asked her, on the call, if she would mind this, she bluntly rejected, saying that it was just so shallow of me to think like this... You know, since I arrived here, I'm at my aunt's place and it would be great, if I could crack this deal, as this place is quite near the University and also I couldn't bother my aunt anymore."

"Yeah....Desperate needs requires desperate measures....Well, I shall take your leave now..All the Best and yes, nice to meet you."

"Thanks, same here."

Approaching the door of the Room756, Jordan just tried to compose himself as the place and people were new here and he had to crack this deal anyhow. Taking a deep breath, he knocked the door....

"Wait a minute....I'll just be there." came a sweet, innocent voice. This voice made him sensual for a moment, but quickly recovering, he just smiled and answered " Sure..take your time.".

"Oh...I'm sorry. Please come in. Hi ! I'm Jessica and you must be Jordan, right ?.." Even before he could reply, she continued, " I didn't thought you would be that skinny type's judging from your voice on phone....Well, anyways, I shall show you the apartment and then you can decide about sharing !"

Grabbing an opportunity to speak, he softly and affirmatively replied, "I don't need to see it. I had already made up my mind to ..."

"Wait...do you have any medical problem ? you know, I mean its necessary that I should know, if you are suffering from any predicament...."

"No...nothing at all.....infact, I.... !"

Cutting him, Jess just went on, "Great....so, when are you shifting ?"

"I'll be here by the next month, that is, two days from now......Is it fine ?"

"Yup...completely fine with me....."

Jordan returned home just thinking about Jess...she was even more mesmerizing than her voice...the dark pink knee-length skirt with a black top...taller than him but had the best hips and legs he had ever seen in his life.Her face was even more attractive than the best actress he had ever seen on-screen. He was just so excited to shift there and living with such a blonde that his excitement caused him an extra travel fare as he missed his stop while in the bus and had to return back. He couldn't even sleep that night. Just thinking, that just one encounter made him her slave of her beauty......"Would she be my girl-friend ??? ..ummm....dunno....Why am I so desperate about her ???? May be she is that kindda girl....if I dont get her first, somebody else will...." his thoughts never stopped asking himself and got lost into her.....

Well, soon the day arrived when he shifted. She seemed nice to him, very helpful indeed. He was, by now, so inclined towards her that he would have done anything for her.

Days passed by and his desperation about her, frustrated him so much, that, finally he managed to ask her for a date. Surprisingly, she agreed, which was indeed awkward, as such a girl, would so easily be impressed by a skinny boy, who dosen't even know her well ! Everything seemed magical for Jordan now.

A year had passed and his course had finished and still he didn't manage to tell her that he liked her. Just some gestures, but never on her face and neither did she displayed any sign's of liking him, that way, ...!!!! Now Jordan had to shift to a new location where he had gained a reputable job.

This is where everything changes !!!!!

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The story is to be continued......kindly comment on the approch taken. I dunno if this is a stereotype or would somebody like to hear more ...!!!!

At the end of the story -
{The final statement Jordan says," Oh God....gasps heavily.... I should have known.......... about her psychological problem....shit....now what am I suppose to do !!!.....would I get out of here alive ...?????? No,not again, no, no, stop please nooooooooooo...mmmmfffffff..."
}

couchman
04-24-2010, 4:36 PM
Good start, Jimmy. Good dialogue and inner-monologue. Perhaps more physical description of her would help, though.

jimmybom
04-25-2010, 8:34 AM
Thanks for the guidance. I shall try to make that up in the next issue.

jimmybom
04-25-2010, 9:17 AM
The Apartment (continued)

Jordan had to shift to a new place within a week after a year long stay with Jessica. But, he wanted Jessica to know that he liked her and know her feelings for him as well. Jessica was disappeared the whole day after hearing about his new job and didn't even picked up the calls made to her by Jordan.

Jordan was quite surprised at her behaviour. She wasn't so passé before now. He had a mixed feeling of happiness as he found out she might like him and stress as she wasn't responding his calls the whole day long. He just couldn't figure what he should do.

Finally, when she arrived home, he tried to approach her but she stared at him so sternly that he dare talk to her or even ask her what was wrong. She simply went to her room and closed the door. Jordan was now feeling quite low and simply went to his room thinking about the packing list.

After some time, a card slipped into his room saying, "Date ? ". He thought he is imagining things, but soon grabbed onto his senses when he holded the card in his hand. He quickly opened the door to greet her and say his feelings for her but before he could do that, she was there, standing just opposite to him, staring in his eyes. Jordan couldn't help but look at her prostrate form with 6'3", open blonde hair with such a casual black-skirt,reaching above her thighs and the red-top that revealed a bra-line. He had never seen her like this even after spending a year. He was hardly, 6, so towering him, he barely reached her bra's, showing a fine lining over her breasts.

Softly smiling down at him, knowing what he was seeing, she was filled with a sense of pride towards her body, she asked, " Dinner ?", pointing towards the table, decorated so aesthetically, he just gulped in the words and staggeringly replied "after you". "This is it. I must tell her I liked her and if she will move with me. I can bear her expenses, that shouldn't be an issue", he thought.

She seemed quite nice to him as the dinner went on. Both started eating while discussing today's day and other memories they had of that year but neither of them mentioned about their liking for each other.

When, finally, Jordan decided to ask her, he started feeling little dizzy, his world started shaking and moving around him and the last thing he saw was her smiling down at him coldly, as if nothing is wrong.

Everything went black thereafter.

mangee1976
04-27-2010, 1:56 AM
Nice one so far. Keep it going!

new_slave09
04-28-2010, 10:03 AM
continue? please

equidum
04-29-2010, 12:44 AM
Wow .... What's going to happen ... Please tell us quickly !!!!!!