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Tinyjoshua
01-21-2010, 11:03 PM
This is a short extract of the story im writing, enjoy :)

It was dark, Jay saw her coming, she was massive, he could not move. He was bound to the queening chair, head where her butt would be. She was huge, like a mammoth. Every step she took made a mini earthquake, jay knew this was the end, His brother watched as the girl began to sit down on jay, slowly and steady. She was wearing no underpants, jay was scared shitless. She began her decent, jay sillently prying, and within seconds she sat down stright and fully on him, he head was pushed right up her asshole. Nothin but his body could be seen. Jays brother Jack watched as the events unreaveled within his eyes. The women got up, jay was motionless. Hes head in a bloody mess. The girl walked up to him one last time, opened his mouth and took a big stink dump right in his mouth. Then she left, pulling on Jacks collar he obeyed and followed her, leaving what was his brother behind.
Please comment on what u think. The story (if u dont know already) is called the Invasion.

sistersboy
01-22-2010, 8:35 PM
I would love to read more of this story. It sounds great. Please continue.

sharp
02-02-2010, 7:56 PM
Been away for a few days, and this looks like a story which I would love to read!! Please finish it and post it here! Thank you