The revenge (my first story)

[Tinyjoshua]

WARNING: CONTAINS FARTS AND HUMAN TOILETS

Elise was always the cute and quiet one, but she was always bullied, she was the top of her class. But for popularity, a poo was always more popular then her. But there was always this one guy she hated the most. He treated her the worst, she was always looking for revenge to get him back, and for Elise this time had come.

Elises P.O.V:
"I have created it" she says screaming, annoying her nearby sister. "so what is it, a formula of some sort" she says to Elise, half asleep as it was 1:00 am in the morning. "yes, but not just any formula, this formula can turn a human being into whatever the user what them to by saying a magic word" elise said. "whats the word" "the word is Dirtbag" elsie says as she gets a saringe. "so whos the test subject" says her sister. "that dirtbag jack, hes always been a dickhead, now hes goingto be a dickhead with a curse" she says as she laughs and head out side the Lab in the school and head to her dorm room and head to bed....

Tpo be continued (your comments help)

[macrina]

Ok but please more. Thank you.

[door_step]

Wowww, yesss, this is definitely going into the direction of a superb story

Look forward to read more

Doorstep

[Tinyjoshua]

When Elise woke up, she was so excited she almost wet her pants. She so wanted to try this Formula she jumped out of bed and got her clothes on. She dident bother putting new underpants on. She started looking for jack, she eventually found him. She got her sister to distract the people around her as she injected the saringe in his butt, for some reason he dident notice and she ran away.
School day resumed normal, but when everybody started going to bed, Elise caught up to Jack in the corriders, she got rid of his friends and brought him to an empty classroom. "what do u want bitch" he said. "Dirtbag Small" Elise said and suddenly jack started to grow small, within seconds he was the size of Elises pinkie. "excellent" she said, all she could hear was him screaming. She took him back to her room. Elise sleep in her PJs and bra, sowithout hesitation she undressed and popped the miniature jack down her panties, she slid down to her butt and she jumped into bed and wnet to sleep with jack struggling to escape. The next morning Elise woke up, she pulled Jack out of her pants, washed him under a tap and said "dirtbag toilet". Suddenly Jack turned into a toilet right in front of her. Immeditly she sat down and did a big shit and piss, but decided not to flash. Suddenly her sister woke up. "where did that toilet come from" her sister said and started to walk to it and sit down. "thats my toilet Jack" said elise as her sister started to piss. "OMG, it worked" her sister said... To be con't.

What do u think so far??? If u wanted something done please post a comment or if something needs fixing.

[butt2facex2]

With a rebel yell he cried more more more !!

[macrina]

So far so good, please go on. Thank you.

[db5]

keep it up! :)

[door_step]

O yes, like it so far.:thumbsup2:

Could be a bit more explicite writing with some more details:wink2:
Very nice that her sisters uses "it" without even knowing it's Jack.
She might even place him as a toilet in the girlsroom at school.

Maybe Jack will be a on the floor in the class room, where all the girls trample him thinking it's just a part of the floor. His new existence might be to be the doormat

Look forward to the following part.

Doorstep

[Tinyjoshua]

Part 3:
Her sister got off "so hows it work" she says. "all u do is say the codeword and what u want him to be and he turns into it, it can be anything" Elise says. "oh awsome, ok let me try Dirtbag tissue" elise's sisters says and Jack turns from a toilet to a tissue on the floor. Elise picks it up and gives it to her sister and watches as her sister wipes her nose with it. "awsome" she says. "ok well ive got to get to class, lets try him being underpants" Elise says and she says the word and within seconds Jack turns into a pair of Undies. Elise goes to put them on and she walks out.

Jacks POV: I was with my friend when she came, Elise, the bitch. She seemed happy to see me, her sister was with her, My friends got distracted by her sister and suddenly i fell a pinch in my butt. I turn around and see Elise with A saringe, she suddenly runs away, confused i continue along the day as usual. Suddenly it was getting late, i was heading to the dorms when i run into Eliase "what do u want bitch" i say trying to get past her. " Dirtbag small" she says, i suddenly feel funny, i see as elise starts to turn bigger and bigger every second. I look to my right to see a huge piece of rubbish, i then relise ive shrunk!! Suddenly her huge hand comes towards me and picks me up, i try to break free but fail. She opens her pants and drops me in. Im facing her hairy vigina, i suddenly jump up and down as she walks. Suddenly im pulled out, i see a light, then within seconds dropped down again, but this time facing her but. It stinks really bad, i feel like throwing up, Elise moves and i move with her, coming close with her butt every time, suddenly she puts her hand in her undies, grabs me and pushes my inside her butt crack, it was so hot and stinky i pass out. I wake up to the wetness of me, elise is washing me under a tap, im drenched, suddenly she says "dirtbag toilet". Before i knwo it, i feel stranger, i cant move, i see a huge but cover my view, i then relise ive turned into a toilet. The butt (being elises). Elise starts to piss, and as the liquid drops to the water in the toilet i can tase all of it, its disgusting, but i could not faint nor throw up. Suddenly she does a huge shit, i can tase it its awful, i wish she would flush so i can get rid of this taste. After a few more poos she gets off, im relived thinking shes finsihed and will flush, suddenly another bum appears, its her sister. I an as the Taste of elise poo combines with her poo, its disgusting. After around 10 minutes of talking between the 2 i hear elises sister say "dirtbag tissue" and before i knwo it im a tissue. I lay on the floor, light and fragile. Elsie sister picks me up, suddenly im pushed into her noise, i can tase everything, its like everypart of my body has become a tounge, its horrible, im scrunched and torn inside. Within a few minutes im taken out and dropped. I feel relived but sore, i can still taste shit and boogers, all i can smell is Farts from elise from being stuck in her asshole, but what i did not know what was coming next!!
I hear the words "dirtbag underpants" i dread the most and as predicted, im a pair of under pants, Elise comes and puts me on, my noise part being where her but goes being stuck between her asshole its discusting, what did i do to deserve this :(

Thanks u for all your great comments, the next part of the story will continue with elise then with jack POV. I will try t put your ideas in the story, remember your feedback and ideas help.
Please report any errors or anything needing changing.
Oh and please note that the story is based at a school for 18 and over students only (just keeping it safe with moderators)
Some of Jacks POV is changed a bit compared to the story with elise

[macrina]

Great story, thank you.