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mrtramplefantasy
11-19-2009, 1:54 AM
I didn't write this story read it in other fourm. When he finish the second part I will add it to here


new story.
Just when you thoughthahaha the creators of saw ran out of ideas.


It was a hot afternoon in July and John was walking home from work to his downtown Atlanta condo.hahaha But he never makes it home.hahaha He wakes up tied to a hard wood bench, with a big headache. His head constrained where he cant turn his head only looking up.hahaha he remembers a hard whack on the back of his head and then nothing, just waking up here.hahaha About 30 min later a voice over the intercom,hahaha John you are always expecting women to please you. you are a womanizer who lives a lonely life.hahaha in just a moment you will be expected to please a woman or die.hahaha He thinks to himselfhahaha this shouldn't be too hard. i can handle this.

It was a hot afternoon in July and Julie was walking home from work to her south side Atlanta apartment.hahaha But she never makes it home.hahaha she wakes up naked in a small room only remembering a foul smell then passing out.hahaha Julie always walked by herself,hahaha she was so self conscious of her size, being nearly 600lbs. she didn't have too many friends or anybody at home.hahaha A voice comes on the intercom.hahaha You have been brought here because you believe you have no friends or nobody wants you.hahaha all you have to do to get out of here is go into the next room and sit on that mans face for 4 minutes.hahaha if you dont then you will never get out of here.hahaha then all goes silent and a few minutes later the door opens automaticly.

Julie looks into the next room and sees a man tied to a bench, thinking to herself " all i have to do is sit and we can go home".hahaha I'm not so sure about this she starts beating on the wall let me out of here.hahaha the voice on the intercom, do this and you both can go home, you have 1 min to get over there and do it or poison gas will fill the room.hahaha She turns around and starts waddling to the man tied to the bench.hahaha Hello, who is there the man yells.hahaha Ok Lets get this over with she thinks to herself as the approaches the man,hahaha are you ready to get out of here buddy, Yes he says and with that she turns around and starts to lower her ass.hahaha oh god this is not what i thought yells the man.

John is terrified when he see Julie's 600lb ass lowering on him to become the longest 4 minutes of his life.hahaha As soon as that ass touches his face a timer across the room starts running,hahaha the pressure is immense, john's nose is against Julies anus and mouth on her harry crotch.hahaha 30 seconds pass, the pressure is immense he starts to panick, then he remembers what he has to do, he starts licking that tongue as fast as humanly possible.hahaha She approaches orgasm, he is working hard as possible then it happens, she has a huge orgasm, yesss she screams, he continuously works at her again and again she cums and covers her face in her juices.hahaha he manages to get a few breaths as her body rock with each orgasm.hahaha 2 minutes passes the timer. to be continued

THE-FACE-SEAT
11-19-2009, 11:01 AM
Wow that was not a good story sorry:crying2:

graveuk
11-19-2009, 11:43 AM
hopefully it will get better just leave the hahaha's out

volupfan
11-20-2009, 6:27 AM
Come on gang ... give mr tf a break here. I think its a decent start of a story. Since he takes his inspiration from a movie you may not be able to call it an original idea but its something different for this board, and lets see where it goes before we scare him off. We need more writers!

volupfan

Fcushion
11-20-2009, 9:08 AM
I like it ...

mrtramplefantasy
11-20-2009, 11:30 AM
Thanks but if you read the first part I didn't write this story. I just though it was a interesting idea. I'm a fan of the movie.